OH MY MOON!
This was FANTASTIC!
The past few chapters were so well written, I got an adrenaline rush from just reading them!
And the ending is so satisfying. Of course they wouldn’t leave. They have too much to bare to leave behind.
I will definitely be reading this again and reviewing on all the chapters and I will definitely be checking out your other stories!
~KitoH

I lost it when Aster said “It’s a part time job.” And how Jack’s dad just went with it!:D
However you managed to completely flip my mood with that last bit!
Enjoying this loads!
~KitoH

Thank you! This story was a great read! Keep it up!

Wasn't it Jared or something like that?

I really liked this! I shall now read the sequel

Nice!

I'm officially lost now xD I hope Aster saves him or something. I came from Runaway so I just skipped most of this lmao

Do u do you have all those folders and stuff? To be honest if u had stuff in all the Maths section it would be amazing!if u do look me up on Instagram
It would mean the whole world to me,
Thank you,
Sorry for bordering u,
A,S

Goodness gracious, this was awesome! I can't wait to read the next one, which I am doing right now! :D

I love this story! please continue writing?! Even though you haven't updated in over two years... But hey, I can still hope, right?

this is one of the best most elaborate stories i have ever read. the plot line was beautiful and the suspense was perfect, i absolutely loved is grade A material. this is definitely one of my favorite stories.

I laugh harder when Jack sort of phrase that he and his sexual teacher. Hehehehe.

This is a piece of art. I absolutely love the tale! I've read it and what there is of the sequel many times. :) Keep going on whatever you aim to do... This is only the start of genius!

Ha bu wha but ah ! Oh my goodness just wow I was moving all around my room reading this chapter (on my iPod) cuz I couldn't sit still cuz it was so suspensefulish oh my goodness ahhhhbhhhhhhh amazing amazing amKmg amazing amazing amazing ok this is going in my top ten faveourite stories it's so good so does that mean there a sequel or is it more of what happened I'm detail ? :) amazingly written well done everyone should read this

Oooooh snap ! No no no no no nononono It can't end no i don't want them to leave their families will his brother wake up ? Do they go to jail no I don't want to read the last chapter cuz I don't want it to end ok I'm gonna go and read it amazing job on this story you had me gasping a lot oh and hey they don't now about him trying to commit suicide D: ahhhh so much