| Reviews for A Grey Justice on the Horizon |
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  Guest chapter 13 . 7/8 WHERE ARE YOU? STILL WITH US? |
 Esmereilda chapter 5 . 4/14 I fig'd something like this was gunna happen when u made the Icarus reference and now xander's story is eerily similar to bruce's esp if he decides to go the superhero route or he might go the antihero route but I doubt that xander even after this will become a villain |
| StonerMcWeedPot chapter 6 . 4/1 I’m glad you killed her but Xander was so fucking cringe at the end there |
| StonerMcWeedPot chapter 5 . 4/1 The thing about Bette is that you haven’t given her any character development. The reader couldn’t care less about her. Makes for a shit pairing if that’s where your going with this. Other than sloppy writing, the only reason for including Bette would be to kill her off to develop Xander as a character? I don’t even know at this point, I’m halfway through this chapter and am shit bored. |
| StonerMcWeedPot chapter 5 . 4/1 For fucks sake please don’t let this be Xander/Bette. |
| StonerMcWeedPot chapter 4 . 4/1 I thought the Kanes were relatives of the Waynes. |
| loki98065 chapter 13 . 1/27 ahhh Cliff hanger. this was great. hope you loop back around to this at some point |
| Amun565 chapter 4 . 12/13/2019 I was digging where the story was going, but this whole arc seems both naive and out of place. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/18/2019 UPDATE SOON! |
| wildcore chapter 13 . 11/5/2019 very good you have to update this soon |
| kirosyamcha chapter 5 . 9/13/2019 Well you just killed my favorite character in your story so far :/ and you made Xander the predictable angstsy child I figured he would end up so that’s unfortunate. |
| kirosyamcha chapter 4 . 9/13/2019 I don’t understand his reluctance to use his powers, it’s quite silly especially if he’s using the knowledge already. |
| JimmnyCricket chapter 13 . 8/5/2019 oh man though i hate that you killed off the sunnydale family... and xander leaving... Willow is the only one i don't like when she gets an ego... otherwise i love the Xander /willow dynamics of brother sister feel... Xander is my favorite though i don't like het ...i will read it if it is good...it was sad you killed his first g/f and sadder that she sacrificed herself for him as she loved him... i am glad you made dr light pay, and xander more okay with bad guys get what they deserve. I also feel that way if they are truly bad guys... Will there ever be anymore? |
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/18/2019 UPDATE SOON! |
| demonic hellfire chapter 13 . 6/10/2019 I'm going to be very surprised if this doesn't end up being a harem story. |
