| Reviews for The Winds That Collide Us |
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   Wolfisis chapter 12 . 9/5/2014 I liked this story. |
| EemsTheDork chapter 12 . 4/22/2014 It was so sweeeeeeeet. Awwwwwwww ./_/. I was blushing as I was reading it. |
| SophiaGrey chapter 12 . 11/17/2013 I really enjoyed reading your story, it was amazing! I look forwards to reading more of your work! |
| sbrock777 chapter 10 . 11/13/2013 Yea a wedding |
| sbrock777 chapter 9 . 11/13/2013 Romantic chapter |
| sbrock777 chapter 8 . 11/13/2013 Awe sweet |
| sbrock777 chapter 7 . 11/13/2013 Oh poor loki but he's alive so I have happy tears |
| sbrock777 chapter 6 . 11/13/2013 This is a very good story sorry about the lack of reviews for the other chapters but just know they were very good as well looking forward to reading more. So on to the next chapter. |
| Aralas Baggins chapter 10 . 7/26/2013 So sweet! Love this update! |
| Francis Bonnifoy chapter 10 . 6/5/2013 OMG I love this |
| cara-tanaka chapter 10 . 6/2/2013 Looking forward to more |
| cara-tanaka chapter 9 . 5/26/2013 Looking forward to more |
| krose240 chapter 8 . 5/20/2013 Very good story. I quite like it. However (yes, I'm sorry, I know however is a bad word when it comes to reviews) there are a few little things I'd like to address: First off, the word "then" is used to in the sense of saying "and then this happened" while the word "than" is used to compare in the sense that "Loki is hotter than the sun" or something to that effect. Secondly, I noticed that your tenses got mixed up in a few places. Perhaps a second look at your writing is in order? All in all, a little cliche, but good. The grammar mistakes don't take away from the story itself, though they bug me (I'm a grammar Nazi...sue me!). Keep writing, you have real potential! |
| cara-tanaka chapter 8 . 5/20/2013 Looking forward to more |
| Aralas Baggins chapter 7 . 5/18/2013 He's alive! |
