Please continue! I really really love your story!

Please continue to edit! i want to know what happens so badly! I'm guessing Momo was engaged to Aizen maybe to cause he to go completely wild and crazy. i'm curious to see how Ichigo deals with his newly discovered information about Rukia. And the eventually kiss between them cause we all know its coming. Anyway I look forward to your next update!

Hi, New reader here! The premises for the story is great! i love all the tension between Ichigo and Rukia while they're completely oblivious everyone else notices it. I look forward to reading more!

Lol. This is so cute. But who was Momo engaged to? (Letting my Hitsuhina side get the better of me) XD either way, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I really like your writing style :)

Please continue writing this story, I literally spent the past few days trying to find this story, only to find that most of it was deleted. IF you can't rewrite it, any possibility of you posting what you originally had?

Loved this story,

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Renji fangirling over Ichigo . . . BWAHAHAAAAH ! ! ! XDD I LOVE IT ! ! ! JUST ADD GRIMMJOW AND THEY CAN HEADBUTT AND FIGHT OVER ICHIGO ! ! ! OMG IT WOULD BE AWESOME ! ! ! . . . XDD

I like this new version much better, I hope you will make this plot even more interesting then last one /not that it wasn't interesting/. Good luck ! ! ! TwT

New reader! I love this so far, keep up the good work!

I really liked this chapter, we got a lot of information about their past way earlier. So I can't wait to see where this will head. Because I see you are adding in extra things too, and it really is interesting.

Either way, this chapter or the original chapter 2 were both well written! Have fun with... people... and keep up the great work :)

Yay! I like it. I liked the thing about Rukia's ovaries exploding. It is really funny, I just learned that phrase a couple of months ago and I use it everyday. It's, like, my favorite phrase.

I'm onto the next chapter, keep up the great work :)

Lol can't wait to keep reading

I find that you are incorporating a lot more rounded information in the chapters early on and have reset the tone for where the 'original' version ended up.

You've established the history and idiosyncrasies earlier, so I'm guessing it will transition more smoothly down the road. Nope - not disappointed at all. You seem to have a clearer sense of direction and overall tone.

Ahhhh! I absolutely love this story! It's got me on such an edge I'm so nervous to see what happens, and I just cannot wait for the next chapter! Your doing such a great job! But I am a little curious how come there's no chad...? Haha, but really keep up the great work. I can't wait to see what happens next! Especially between Renji and Tatsuki, and what happens to Ichigo!

Please mention which chapters you are editing. And please don't abandon it!

If you want a beta, ask one of us. We don't bite. :) We became betas because we want to see writers reach their full potential both in developing a story and/or doing simple edits so readers can enjoy a less bumpy read. It is so much easier to edit the work of someone else than your own.

Unless you are planning to make significant STORY changes, send the back chapters off to a beta to edit and just keep writing. Seriously, that is what we are here for.

"What does he mean by 'child-bearing hips?! Does he mean I'm fat?!"
I loved that out of all of the things that just happened, this is what Rukia was stuck on.

Awww...Kensei & Mashiro. :( Bound by chains sounds like...

You did an excellent job with Hisagi & Kugo's commentary. It was snappy and moved the action along.

I actually thought you'd have Tosen win. Good for Ichigo, and Kenpachi's training still being what paid off in the long run. Go figure.

I HATE THE LEECH. Make her go away. She's a good one to die.