| Reviews for Love Emerging Through Pain |
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misaosagara chapter 8 . 9/23/2019 Hi, I really hope that u finish this story, it’s really amazing, I’ve been reading all your Inayasha’s fanfics and this is one of the best! Please finish it! |
Guest chapter 6 . 9/5/2019 Sesshoumaru could be a great shrink. |
zackayu chapter 8 . 3/31/2019 Please update |
Tyra Tigeress chapter 8 . 2/1/2019 Will there be any more updates to this story? |
TaxLady0415 chapter 8 . 11/5/2018 I hope you come back to this story. I love how your stories show Kagome learning, maturing and coming to healthy conclusions. In this tale, I can understand how she would seek to end all the pain, given the suppressed memories of his repeated rape attempts. |
seleane.gray chapter 8 . 8/1/2018 While I don't usually like how prevalent suicide in fan fiction is, I will say this, I can understand how Kagome could come to the thought that it would be better. How you have it set up it lends to the story instead of just useless angst which I see no point in personally. If you are going to write a story whatever elements you put in it, in this case suicide and repressed memories of traumatic events, it need to push the story toward the end even if that is a tragic one. With that aside, I can't wait to see more of this and where you are taking it. If I review it tends to mean I like the story so I hope you see this as such. There are mistakes that if you go back and reread before continuing the story will fix and there isn't many but there is enough to be a problem at times. I've never been suicidal, and won't be if I have any say about it, however I do know depression. Kagome is truly depressed and I can feel that but some how, and this could just be me, the suicidal thoughts seem a bit forced. Yes, I agree that everyone has a breaking point and once it's reached it takes a LARGE effort to get back to ground zero, even more so to move beyond the starting line. With how Inuyasha teases Kagome and degrades her and how he can't choose or doesn't want to, it's enough to throw anyone down the proverbial rabbit's hole. However I think all the death, life threatening situations, the problems with the jewel, battles and wounds would wear on a person's core strength, that part of you that keeps you pushing on. Seeing Miroku and Sango be romantic, even in small ways, would even add to this. Having someone rely on you, Shippo in this case, when you are only a child yourself adds another layer to it. What I'm getting at is that maybe you can show this in the story. Also, another thing, that you could show is how her personal needs aren't met. Search Maslow's hierarchy of needs. It's a pyramid of needs the average person has and must be met for said person to feel content and happy. The higher parts of the pyramid can cause people to fall into depression and suicide, it could help when you get back to the story. All I can say now is, MORE PLEASE! :D |
Wheel0fDawn chapter 6 . 4/18/2018 hope one day you continue this, would love to see her got the bastard. |
rebelheart1986 chapter 1 . 11/28/2017 would love to see this story finished, in very intrigued by it last night and finished it this morning. update soon please! |
Consulea Harden chapter 8 . 10/21/2017 Love the story hope to read more chapters and I would love to see what will happen in the story. |
Jenelle 93 chapter 8 . 10/9/2017 we need another update |
baby-kitsune9 chapter 8 . 10/2/2017 please update |
Lovely4Kitsune chapter 8 . 9/6/2017 Please update soon.. I love this story and it is very interesting |
Veraozao chapter 8 . 7/27/2017 love it, kiss |
Rayvin587 chapter 1 . 7/19/2017 Oh gods I need another chapter. I love your writing and want to see how she gets back to future Sesshomaru. Because he needs her too. Does she get a long life like in your other fics? Or does past him send her back to future him? I want to know! |
Juliastes chapter 8 . 7/5/2017 You deserve love. I'm curious what kind of conversation they will have next. |