While I wouldn't call her a whore, Jackie did act pretty irrational in this chapter. Don't get me wrong, she's, in my opinion, one of the best oc's in this fandom, but the way she tried to justify herself kind of made her sound like a step down from a selfish brat to me. Just my opinion tho

I guess Jackie's already overcome her fears, then! She's so like me!

The second one. But about the last few paragraphs after Jackie tells him to prove he missed her: Since Gray is the Lizard, does this mean he has an instinctual side, similar to the other animal Role-Holders, and doesn't remember what happens when that side shows itself? Please get back to me on this, though I know I'll probably figure it out myself if I keep reading.

I laughed so hard at Gray attempting to cook. I had to look away for a minute just to get over it. XD

You say it's complete yet another chapter huh

Okay, this chapter was so frickin' adorable. With Jackie trying to exert independence and Gray trying to get her to rest her ankle so that she doesn't make her injury worse. I love how Gray totally gives in when she starts pleading with him to fix what's in the basement.

I especially loved the last part in Gray's POV.

Must. Read. MORE. I wanna see more adorable moments with Gray / ! I also love Nightmare's reaction to Gray's thoughts XD that's what you get Nightmare for reading his thoughts! Please update soon! :D Also could you possible by chance make a story with a Nightmare x Jackie pairing? :) I would love to read it if you do.

OMG I love this chapter so much *completely overwhelmed by the adorableness* . So cute! Haha looks like Gray does have a weakness! :D

Gray's cooking... just watching it being prepared *pales* is terrifying O.o

I love this story please update

please continue ur story

Love it!
The Jokers are awesome! Gray's pretty cute too.

Please update soon! I just love this pairing!

Please update soon! I need to know what happens!

New Chapter! There I loved this story, it's so funny yet sweet.