Hello. You might remember me from Space and Time- then again, you might not, haha. I often left reviews on it. Of course, being 12 at the time, my reviews were...not good. Apologies. I still retain my view that that story was excellent, though.

This story intrigued me in the same way Space and Time did, the style is just so refreshing! Your world building is fascinating and detailed, and you incorporate OCs well. You also have excellent characterization! I found this story because I was going to re read Space and Time, and I'm glad I did. It held my attention and was a very good read.

Thank you for writing!

This is great, keep it up. By the way, is sonic going to have an appearance in this fix soon?

Are we going to see more areas; like the stages in the smash bros series?

Hey fire-emblem-gaiden, can everyone turn into a trophy or can only the smashers be able to turn into trophies.

I'm asking because I heard the reason why in the games why they turn into their trophy form is that they are clones of the real heroes. Created by master hand so they can fight for his own entertainment. They rebelled however and defeated him.

Also I loved this chapter by the way. Keep up the good work.

I know you said that the newcomers from SSB4 wasn't going to be in this story. But possibly if you going to create a sequel, you can put them in.

With possiblely a short scene at the end of this fanfic. Like the aftercredits of the marvel movies

This is great, so they are discovering their moveset correct. So possibly in the future they encounter the smash ball and unlock their final smash. It be interesting.

Wowza, I remember being really into Space and Time Cannot Divide back in Ye Olde Days, so I'm really interested to see what you do with this. Keep up the good work!

This whole arc is about finding a way home. I think it be a great plot twist if they can't go back. Like they merged with th e universe. This would give a chance to see how they will react and how they will deal with the lost.

Hey you! My interest has piqued ;) Continue his when you can!

Even though I haven't actually read the other story that's canon to this, I felt like reading it anyways.

I really like the purposely-done lack of description in the story intro. It gives this feeling of wanting to beg for an update, and leaves the mind in sheer question for what happens next, even though some may have read the other story for it, which might have spoiled it a bit, anyways. (Note that since I have never read 'Space and Time Cannot Divide, I might have said something not right.)

I'll wait for chapter 2. Following. Oh, and I have a couple of things I want to say and ask, so PM me if you can.

XxX WrittenWithPencils XxX