well, you managed to last that long with a love declaration that early. If that's not masterful, I don't know what it is.

Great story! But being nitpicky I'd like to point out that Martin is the 5th son of Uriel, the first being the bastard son Calaxes

Great story so far and I love the set up but I am disappointed by the fact that you had to make Torin so handsome it's nothing personal but it always makes the story seem a little fake because in a lot of stories like this the hero always has dashing good looks as opposed to a more normal appearance.

We (me and Bella) have been reading since the first chapter and I must say, this is a grand tale that has truly proven worthy of its own book! Congratulations, may the Divines bring their great light upon you and you magnificent story!

That was freaking amazing. That is all.

Final thoughts: It is a rare occurrence to find a great story done so perferctly as yours. I am glad I decided to read this story and it shall remain a member of a my favorites for future reading. Looking back I could see things I would do differently but I wouldn't want to poison my praise with things you cannot change now. I look forward to seeing more of your work and happy to say I have found another spectacular author to follow.

well i say its been one hell of a ride and im a little sad to see it end but at least its done on a good note and will pretend the time before skyrim doesent happen the way it does. so thanks for the wonderfull story, it was fun :P

Oh s**t its on now

Well this blows

Loved it too bad it's the end

Great chapter.i wondered if she was going to be pregnant

more sadness the horror makes for good plot though cant wait to see how this all ends up

Kinda blew through the whole epic Bruma battle :P I was a little disappointed with no Martin speech but whatever.

I'd eat a dead guys heart too if it got me Methrune's Razor XD

Still liking the story