That was amazing! Hot and dirty and happy and lovely at the end as well! I'm impressed - this is going directly on the favourites list!

That's the second story I read from you (after Ordinary Solitude) .
You're very talentend, I believe in every characters, reactions, actions. I do not watch the Sherlock series but it's so well written I can picture those two characters easily.

It's hard to find a great author on the web, but you're one of them. Thank you for that!

o.o yaaaaay! w

Holy melted laptop, Batman! That was...smokin' hot!

"John had elbowed him rather sharply in the side and apologized on his behalf, which was ridiculous, because he was not sorry in the slightest. John had brought him here to show him off, so Sherlock showed off. Yet, it was clear that John was not pleased. So Sherlock had decided to express his own displeasure with the situation by sulking." LOL I love Sherlock's logic. It's so obvious. Great.

"With a sharp "I'm leaving," Sherlock spun on his heel and marched out of the pub, throwing elbows and stomping on toes freely as the crowd jostled him. Behind him he heard a few voices raised at his departure, but whether in delight or protest he did not care to find out." I can just see Sherlock storming out of the pub like a world-class diva throwing a hissy fit.

Oh, wow, ok...That was so freaking hot. Loved the story!

Go away, we're fucking...wow. now there's something you don't hear every day...XD
this was awesome! :)

love this story!

Wow. Okay, where to begin. The pub stuff was great. The line "Under the table, though, John's hand found Sherlock's knee and he rubbed it briefly before giving it a squeeze." was fantastic in subtly telling us about the current state of their relationship. The alley was...well, I may need to go take a cold shower. And ending that section with Sherlock telling the guy outside the alley quite honestly & bluntly that they were screwing was such a great way to change the mood instantly lighter. Great piece!

Love!