interesting. please update soon.

Please continue I really like this

great story. great writing skills. please update soon.

Hmm I think you have the chance to show how if Jonathan had grown up with Clary, he'd pick her over Valentine.

Good!
Q: does Jonathan hate Clary now? Or he just hate shadow hunters?

Too lazy to log in : I'd still keep reading this story, because I really enjoy how this concept is original and interesting, but I'd have to agree with a previous reviewer: It does kind of feel like the canon series, only with a new face and a different POV, because I'm not really seeing any major plot-veer-off yet. However, I still think you should continue and surprise us with an awesome plot twist because Jonathan's in this story and will certainly eventually derail the canon plot train.

Don't stop writing this story! It's great and one of a kind! I'm looking foreward to reading the next chapter!

"Jonathan never knew his father; he had died before he was born."
If Jonathan's father died before he was born, that makes Clarissa his half sister .

It's very nice, but it seams to me that your copying the book only adding Jonathan's name and POV .. other that that it's great .

This is so good!

YES! an update:)

Awesome! Keep updating, please!

Man please update soon because this is a truly amazing story that I really want to be continued :)

Really interesting take on City of Bones. I feel like Jonathan's one of the more interesting and complex characters and wish we could seem from first person from him in the actual series. Please keep updating!

This is getting more interesting! XD Yah, the dialogue is a bit stilted, but the idea! ICAN'TTHISIS-

Yeah.

Keep up the writing! This one will happily devour anything :)

The chapter is by far your best till now - at least in my opinion. Please, keep updating regularly!