Dude... If you took out the Pokemon part you might as well be a preacher. I'm sorry if non religious but wow...

Continue! Please continue! This story is amazing!

I can't wait until later chapters I loved the original story...so I can not wait for this one

Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! :D

I'll be watching this.

What a blast from the past, seeing ya write again.

Semicolons do not indicate sophisticated or intelligent writing, even when grammatically correct. Use sentence-connecting semicolons sparingly, judiciously, and only when the ideas in the clauses are inseparable. If you have a semicolon sitting between a pair of sentences because the sentences are kind of, sort of related, it just makes you look pretentious.

Hm. Well, I don't think you really needed to go through the whole of the creation myth from the very start - it's well trodden ground by now. But the business with his accidental creations and their falling in love and angering him is an interesting one.

[All deities had to be loyal to God among all others. This would prevent any suspecious 'uprisings' or give the humans any ideas.]

I don't think you need this. It makes him sound a lot weaker that he even concerns himself with the idea they might not be, and there's no sign this was an issue yet anyway. Banning love and reproduction seems like all you need here.

Also, spellcheck.

Nice beginning, can't wait for the rest!

This is certainly a different start from your last story! I can't wait to see what you make of it.

Will there be romance between Darkrai and Cresselia? I notice that romance wasn't listed as a genre.

Oh, and I think this is a good restart.

Interesting start. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Great start for the remake! Can't wait for moar!