So I really like the idea behind this story, but I am finding it really hard to follow and for me it doesn’t flow at all.

Excellent.

what on earth is happening in this story? why are there random modern day lyrics everywhere? your story line seems like a cool idea and it seems interesting but I can't follow it, it's just getting more and more confusing. there's no backstory or explanation at all. how did Hermione meet Dean? when was she involved with Malloy? what is going on with Ron, why did he get kidnapped? what a wrong with Sam? please clean this story up! I would love to read it but it's just making me frustrated bc it's all over the place.

WHAT THE FUCK! WHY THE HELL DID YOU END IT LIKE THAT? :'(

This is so weird. I burst out laughing when everyone died, it was so...weird. Please take no offence to that. I have no idea what's going to happen next whether that was just a horrible dream or a premonition due to the curse Sam and Hermione 'supposable' have or that everyone just ends up dying.

I don't see how Harry would allow Draco the Death Eater, almost murderer of Dumbledore take Hero Hermione with him while she was in St Mungo. It is ooc.

dean has a daughter :3 continuos

This was brilliant. You truly are an amazing author!

Okay I'm glad Castiel seems to have fallen in love, but isn't he getting ahead of himsel? Like the fact that he's supposed to be BORROWING the body he's currently in, a body who's true owner (and virtual PRISONER of while Castiel is in control) is already married and has a kid. They never brought it up again in Supernatural, but wasn't Castiel supposed to ONLY be borrowing the body for the APOCALYPSE, which the true owner AGREED to? Yet the Apocalypse is long over, the world is sort of saved and the guy who's body Castiel is borrowing's job is done and should be set FREE to return to the wife and daughter he stupidly gave up, but Castiel's not letting him go like he once said he would. And now while in his BORROWED body Castiel has found love with another woman, and is going to further deny the owner of his host body the right to be free to return to HIS true love and family before 1. Wife has him declared dead (again after the last time he saw her with the demon attack), remarries and grows old with another man as her huband, and 2. Miss out on watching his baby girl grow up, get married, have kids and grand kids etc. while Castiel is busy hogging the mans body and further denying him the life he had created when the Apocalypse started

i love it

oh my god i love this story, I hope they escape soon. Please update :)

Amazing chapter! I love it! Please update whenever you can! :D

WOAH.

Amazing chapter! I love it! Please update whenever you can! :D

O.O oh noes. This is not good.