Reviews for The Dimming of the Day
murphycat chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
Emotional story.
lilgenious chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
First thing that I have to say is, I am sorry for the loss of your grandmother, it is always horrible when you lose somebody that you are close to.

As for the story, I really enjoyed the raw emotion here. Even though I don't know this show as well as you do, I really felt for Kristin and felt her loss. I really loved how her character was so strong, so stubborn... yet she was so vulnerable and pushed people away from her when she grieved. As was noticed by Ben who felt that she needed somebody to be with and talk to. It goes to show that people whenever they grieve over the loss of friends or family members, really need that person to speak to- even if it is somebody whom they are not particularily close to.

I really adore your writing and how you seem to really get into the steps of grief in this one. The one thing that I particularily loved was your portrayal of Kristin, she seems like she is a very strong woman in the series so it is always something to see these strong characters break down and become more human to us.