Reviews for Untouchable
Brokenwings35 chapter 19 . 3/20/2016
This chapter is perfect.
Brokenwings35 chapter 16 . 3/19/2016
Amazing chapter.
Brokenwings35 chapter 14 . 3/9/2016
I'm loving your story.
Brokenwings35 chapter 10 . 3/7/2016
Awesome chapter.
Brokenwings35 chapter 8 . 3/7/2016
I liked the chapter.
Brokenwings35 chapter 5 . 3/6/2016
Great chapter.
Brokenwings35 chapter 3 . 3/6/2016
I loved the chapter.
mockingjay35 chapter 21 . 5/29/2014
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
mockingjay35 chapter 18 . 5/29/2014
OMG! WTF IS WRONG WITH TOBIAS! HE SHOULDN'T HAVE DONE THAT TO TRIS! Poor Tris.
mockingjay35 chapter 16 . 5/29/2014
Then he shouldn't have freaking dated her! Clueless guys...so stupid.
mockingjay35 chapter 2 . 5/29/2014
OMG!
Alexis chapter 21 . 10/11/2013
OMG I'm so close to just crying. This story was amazing! Very original if you ask me! I love this sooooooooo much. You are a great writer! I can't wait for more! P.S. I live in Miami, Florida! You have ALOT of over seas readers!

Thanks for writing such a great story!

Alexis
katraj0908 chapter 21 . 6/26/2013
WHAT. THE. HELL. So you just decided to rip my heart out with this story, then put it back together by making Fourtris, but then rip it apart again with this!? ajklfsajlkf;dsajfk
katraj0908 chapter 20 . 6/26/2013
Totally just fan girled...the whole squeal, waving of hands, the whole sha-bang! 3 Fourtris!
4TVDPLL6 chapter 21 . 5/16/2013
Great story. I really didn't enjoy the ending...
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