| Reviews for Original Rainbow Factory |
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   Thefemalearrow chapter 1 . 3/16 This story is twisted but great, |
| rainbow dash chapter 1 . 1/25 WHO WROTE THIS!? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/28/2019 A. Ma. Zing! I feel bad for Rainbow Dash because of her becoming insane, but otherwise awesome! It would have been fun to see Scootaloo get out and Rainbow had to explain why she looked like that! Buuuut... She might just attack her friends I don't know. Anyway awesomly written! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2019 I love the Rainbow Factory! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2019 This IS AWESOME! Despite the gore and language it was a GREAT story! (RIP old rainbow dash XDD) |
| Katie chapter 1 . 12/9/2018 Is this real to My Littel Pony or is it just a story someone made for fun? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2018 ACK |
| Red gyre uni chapter 1 . 6/30/2018 Such a beautiful literary masterpiece |
| Blackberry chapter 1 . 5/13/2018 It was such a intense story, and so emotional, Scootaloo's screams of "I thought you loved me", Auroras's sacrifice, and the last line, "You have beautiful eyes" |
| rosa chapter 1 . 4/14/2018 rainbow dash it was his fist day at the rainbow factory and the want her to kill a pony and she dosnt want too but she have to and she spit blood out and she kill herseylf and some pony drag her body and they made her alive and she change into evil and she was the boss at the rainbow factory and she killed all the ponys and she killed her bffs and he made them alive and change them into evil like rainbow dash and the town was gone and they live badly ever after the end |
| Laticia D chapter 1 . 4/6/2018 This is simply, an AMAZING Grimdark Fanfiction, and I simply CANNOT stop reading it! It gives chills down my spine from both horror and, at the same time, some sadness and deep emotion with it. The ending is just so good and I wish there was a sequel to this (if there is I haven't found it yet). I am a huge fan of My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic, but this makes me love it even more! I didn't even think that possible! Overall this is a great, no, FUCKING AMAZING Grimdark Fanfiction, and I deeply encourage Aurora Dawn to keep writing like this! When I looked outside my window after reading this, I saw a rainbow and that gave me more chills. It's so fucking good, I would write more, but I have to go to school ;9 |
| Glaceon104 chapter 1 . 3/9/2018 Wow this isn't really scary, you should write a sequellots of unimportant stuff, needs more gore and more terrifying stuff, maybe more pictures of stuff |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2018 This is why Princess Luna is my fav |
| Booty chapter 1 . 1/11/2018 Absolutely stunning. I adore the writing! |
| A person chapter 1 . 1/8/2018 Horrible yet creative story |
