So werewolves can smell souls? Dude, you are a fuck’n idiot.

I'm glad that Harry had a wonderful birthday! Poor sod...

Yeah, kill the Dursley's!

Beware of Dumbledore, Harry Potter! He's not all there!

Voldemort was not resurrected in the third film. He wasn't in the film at all. The third film is Prisoner of Azkaban. Goblet of Fire is number four.

I notice this awfull mistake I read in every stories...
If I had known (something), I would have (something).
Unlike what you wrote "If I had of known" . I think it's a common mistake for "if I would have known" which is a mistake too.

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So after the suicide attempt after everything he still has kids? This is a dumb story

I get that they're soul mates and all, but damn. Fast track to love...

Very lovely story and a perfect ending. Thanks for sharing it.

Fantastic

I LOVED THIS BOOK!

can you change the tittle of chap. 13 because it can really confuse people that is reading your story and curse or be pissed at you for not correcting your error. i am one of those people, but i did not curse, i got angry and send you a review of what i feel. this is what i feel, i don't know about your other readers.

why did you type Harry's age 13 he should be 15 years old right, because Tom or Voldemort has been resurected when Harry was 14 right? and you have writen on your preview chapter's before chap. 13 that Harry was 14 years old. can you corret it?

Loved it

~Stasia

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