Hey Chaanoua! I know this story's like 5 years old, but when I first read this story from you, I was INTRIGUED by this fantastic story! Chaanoua I am not only a huge fan of Ape Escape, but also a DIE-HARD fan of you for YOUR amazing Ape Escape stories also! I'm also working on my own story as well! But mine's gonna be a really big project. It's probably not going to be 1 story, but maybe many stories! I feel as if my future stories will be HUGELY inspired by your work! Especially this Ape Escape 4 one. I love the way you portrayed the characters, and how mature they've gotten throughout the years. I'm really planning on taking a similar approach as well with my AE stories! Chaanoua you are AWESOME! And I THANK YOU once again for the inspirational work you've laid down for us hard-core Ape Escape fans (at least the ones who are like you and me, lol). Look forward to more from you!

Wait, so Jake can forgive Natalie for cheating on him with Spike... but he can't forgive Spike for his role in the affair? I mean, Spike even came up of his own accord and tried to sincerely apologize for his prior douchebaggery, and Jake's response is to threaten to maim the guy?

What the actual fuck is wrong with you, Jake?

What, no dramatic cry of "GOTCHA!" on finally capturing Specter? Shame on you.

...I'm kidding. In all seriousness, though, I think it's a tad disappointing how Yumi and Kei pretty much amounted to just a footnote in this story. I'm also not terribly enthused about how you made Spike so much more of a jackass, even if he was brainwashed. For comparison, look at Jake's behavior when he was and wasn't brainwashed.

Heck, the same can even arguably be said for Specter, who in this story is quite the vulgar little ass, when in the first game he seemed quite classy, and in the third game even attempted to make it so that humans and apes would BOTH win with his (admittedly less-than-rational) Double Paradise Plan.

Finally a story where Jake is the main character! even though I prefer spike x natalie I still think its wrong what spike did to jake :/ anyway, cant wait to read more from you! keep up the good work!

A great story. I'll admit the language bothered me at first, but I got over it. The action and dram sequences were nicely done. Specter's plan to destroy the Earth and create a new planet was very creative. Enjoyed every chapter. Good job!

wow man I just read your story here and it was really really awesome. i was just looking for ape escape fan fictions on google search and i like yours the best so far! I mean, despite the mature content its got the action and characters were very well put together and i love it. :)

Poor Spike, he should have known better. This was a great story!

That was an epic battle scene, very good job on this and I can't wait to see the fate of the heroes.

So Natalie is forgiven, despite doing that with Spike. I'm very impressed by this, excellent chapter!

Wow, I didn't see that coming, Natalie and Spike had sex before the entire love confession. This is getting good, keep up the good work!

This story is very cool, I find the plan very interesting! Keep up the good work!

This Story is EPIC! I really like this idea you have. And Hake being the hero this time was a nice touch to it. I'm looking forward to future chapters.