So I come across this story once more.

Hmmm, I really liked the story. It was simple but sweet. But I think you could put in more details on the smaller things, like their date in the restaurant, and their little walk down the beach. Sometimes it's the more detailed descriptions of their activities that make the story more romantic and, what most people would call, cute.

I usually avoid genderbend stories, but this one is by far one of the best I've read. Good job, keep it up. :)

that was soooooo romantic
he do loves her a lot

Awesome story!
I love it soooooo much ;)