The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

Please remove all elements related to the reader such as "[Name]" and replace them with any canon character or original character. Switch to the first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it's allowed like Archive Of Our Own.

please make more adult reborn

Another Giotto plz?

There is no spoon

You sure do use the word "intertwined" a lot.

omj! I feel so effing special right now! (use the white chick voice to get a perfect emotion n voice)

So are you going to update more? I'd love to read more of these stories so I hope you do! I'd love to see one with TYL Yamamoto and kids! It would be so cute!

So cute!
Love your Shimon and Enma ones

Hey could you do:
Daddy!Mammon
TYL Halloween Fran
TYL sleepy Irie
And another Basil?

You know, you agreed to certain rules of this site before you were allowed to publish a story. One of the rules in question says 'no secind person singular point of view', meaning no 'you' POV. No 'reader' pov. So, as many of your chapters are using a POV that is against the rules, you are in blatant violation of the rules in question, and your story could be erased by the admins at any moment (as soon as they see it).

Normally I shouldn't even have to say this, because you read the rules yourself and should know this, as you agreed to the rules. Or maybe you just like testing the rules, to see how much it takes before your story is deleted? Maybe you're fully aware of what you're doing, and yet you continue anyway?

Nonetheless, I do hope you'll edit your chapters from 'you' pov to 'I' pov so that you no longer violate the rules of this site.

Omg! This is so sweet! I love it! Keep it up! thank you for writing such an awesome khr x reader~

Kyaaaa! I started squealing like a little girl, about halfway though the one-shot. Prince Basil~ My life is complete, I have no regets -

Yep basil is definitely prince worthy yasssss just him speaking makes me so happy xD

Why don't you make one for Basil? Baaaaaaasiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiillllllll!

friend-zoned would be the word

Cute! My reviews are so basic, I feel like I just put 'Cute, Awww, Adorable, etc.' Reading these has made my brain turn to mush from the fluffiness #-#