Ur story was awesome...buh i needed sometin more bad and sexy...filled wit porn...u know..like sucking boobs...crushing dicks and balls...rubbing dicks and pussies.. More bad stuffs.. D story is nice.. Buh i need PORN

I LOVE THIS I LOVE YOUR FICS KEEP AT IT GIRL

I FREAKING DANG LOVED THIS STORY. IT WAS AWESOME. AWSOME!

I freaking dang loved this story. It was beautiful, sweet, amazing, and just wow, I think it was cute how marshall lee and fionna had feelings for each other. I get really emotional when it comes to love, and I loved the songs like love sick. Anyway I just very very very very very very very love this story

I'm worried... What's going to happen...?

This is so mathematical! I love the way Fi is interacting w/ different characters other than Marshall Lee. Don't get me wrong I love Fiolee so much (I ship them so hard) but when the characters are JUST Mar Mar & Fi the story seems a bit lonely to me. It's romantic and all and I love it I just think it could use
1 or 2 more characters. I love how Finn, Jake, PB, Gunter & Ice King are listening to the story at the end it just so good. I must read the next chapter!

That was brilliant, I loved it! Next Chapter!

I really enjoyed this. It was sweet and was built up on more than romance but friendship. That's the most important thing you can be to anyone in any form of a relationship. Love Fiolee. And I'm starting to like Fionna and Flame Prince now! So unexpected. Haha

Good job! I think Love Sickness was the best song.

Amazing!

Wow I felt like this story lasted for a year. Just wow.

Awesome dude!

So let me get this straight Marceline is reading/writing a fan fic about fionna and marchell and gin just had to be an odience
Do you get where I am going with this ?

Does it mean Marceline has feelings for Finn and she is showing them through her story XDXDXXDXDDXDXXD

Uh i feel like such an idiot for reading this all late.I really liked how you based a lot of your chapters on actual was an awesome story.

Such a good story! I really hope you write more Fiolee stories. I read the one you wrote about about how Fionna goes out to discover how the Mushroom War started and about the humans(Another awesome story) and I just really want to read more of your Fiolee stories haha. Is it just me or did the beginning of chapter 14 sound like the ending of the last of episode of Avatar: The last airbender?

Love the story!
BTW thanks for the info!
I so wanted to watch this episode for, like, EVER!
A kid on youtube downloaded the episode on his/her ipad i was going to watch but my computer kept freezing up Youtube took it down the next day
Now i've found it and but it's in spanish
Don't matter anyway i can understand it
But i'm still gonna keep searching for the english version.
AGAIN LOVE YOUR STORY!