I bet he's dead, the 'I don't think Brackenfur will be able to see your apprentice ceremony Poppykit' was a dead give away

oops i mean him. sorry! autocorrect :P

Hurrah! Rushbreeze gets her warrior name X3

Someone was copying your story? I WILL MURDER THEM! Your story is perfect the way it is! The dumb people wouldn't even log in. Cowards. -_-

I loooooooooooooooooooove your plotline so far. The chapters go a bit quick but other than that its great!

*grabs Jayfeather's stick* Whoever YEAH and PEARLA MAY or whatever her name is, I'm going to bang them into the ground. *bangs person* WHOOOOTT!
Jayfeather: My stick! You broke it!
Me: Oops. Gotta run! Love your story and I can't wait to read the next chapter! :D

I like it how you made them go "..."hehe funny. :3

yay Rushbreeze has an awesome name

Nice story! I love it! :)
Here's some flames to make some hot chocolate! :D

But I think this chapter is great!

Me: You hurt Rushpaw! How could you! *sobs* Jayfeather, take over please...I am to sad *sobs and hides in corner*
Jayfeather:... *Sarcasm* okay then, Silverlightning hates you and wants to feed you to sharks.
Me: I DO NOT! *holds up fryingpan*
Jayfeather: You wouldn't DARE...what are you doin-no-stay back-no-Noooooooo-BLAM!
BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPP PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP- -_-" darn it all, the beeper broke...again...bye :3

(no cats were harmed in the rp...minus a VERY dazed Jayfeather)

Will Rushpaw recover?
and ummm 'left him to his devices' does Rushpaw have devices? :3

Those apprentices got called out in the middle of the Gathering AND GOT OWNED! YAY Brackenfur! Yay Blackstar for what he'll do. Yay for Rushpaw's first Gathering. Keep writing! Hopefully things get better from there.

aww, poor Brackenfur and Rushpaw! *cries*

Shadowclan seems as if only Blackstar is good right now.

Good chapter. Quick question though: How can Rushpaw say "Flint! I've missed you" when it clearly said in the prologue that Grace 'wished her mate could see their kits'? Doesn't that mean that they haven't met? How can you miss someone you haven't met? Maybe be sad that you don't have a dad, but you can't really miss them can you?

Sorry, just nitpicking.

Do a gathering scene please ! :3