raven hissing saying to garfield wth is wrong with you why are you not talking you are the one that i want to spend the rest of my life with

I'm glad I found this little gem. Lovely writing.

A very good fic, I must addmit, it's a new perspective of these two very interesting :)
Well, very good one-shot, and sorry about my English, I don't speak it very well :D

Ohmygosh where have I been? Writings like these are what fandoms should truly be made out of. Your works inspire me so much!

Oh. Oh my God. Ok, wow!

This is downright incredible. I admire how deep you managed to delve into Beastboy's psyche in so little words, and in second person - of all things! Typically, I dislike second person and short, little dabble-type stories. But this was just amazing! It all fit really well. You made Beastboy so real; his frustrations so believable and relatable. I'm almost speechless. Characterization done this well leaves me stupidly euphoric.

I understand that any more than this would likely take away from its impact, but damn it if it doesn't leave me wanting more!

I understand your dislike of second person POV. It's not really my favorite either. Still, its a testament to your talent that you still wrote a great story nonetheless. You managed to clearly show the feelings and frustrations Gar has. A very well written piece. Keep rockin

Another great story! I have read alot of your work, and I truly enjoy your views. I feel that you really dive into the psychological aspect of their nature and what not...Yeah so there's my boring literature side:) My teen titans fanatic side screams Whooooooo! Go Beast Boy! :D

I was totally thinking of the song "Hate that I LOve" by Ne-Yo and Rhianna. It was realistically BB too.

Wow! Amazing! Really really great job!

This one-shot makes a lot of sense when it comes to the depth of a character. Well done on this :). Have you thought of making this a story? I would certainly read it.