pretty sure konoha and suna were allies in the third great ninja war

how does zetsu know the names of the bijuu?

La storia è promettente, ma la scrittura... diciamo che c'è molto da fare. letteralmente
Un esempio: non c'è bisogno di scrivere Naruto uzumaki Namikaze, è come scrivere tutti i nomi di Albus Silente. Le persone che legge la storia, conoscono già la discendenza di Naruto. La lettura deve essere leggera, meno scrivi, più è piacevole
Altre cose come gli abiti che indossano varie figure, sono superflui, la storia funziona bene anche senza sapere che Hiashi veste elegante, perché alle persone non gliene importa nulla. Ciò che importa è la storia in sé e come si evolve
I rapporti del nostro Jiraya, può essere scritto anche con, i rapporti di Jiraya
In poche parole, aggiungi troppi dettagli superflui.
Spero di esserti stato d'aiuto

Great story so far. Loved the chapter and can't wait to see what happens in the meeting. I can't wait for Naruto to kick ass back in Konoha, oh baby the scenes. Looking forward to the next chapter. Stay safe!

ne gusta este dark naruto sigue teniendo alma y sentimientos pero mata cruelmente a todos sus enemigos sin exepcion y eso ya lo hace mejor a dejarse golpear por sakura y actuar como tonto, ademas me gusta esta hinata con columna ya eso vuelve interesante el fanfic no mencionar la historia en si

My old Xbox 360 was dying so I sold it and all of my games for about 50 dollars. Handed it to my oldest Nephew when I saw him last December.

"Cool" with anything. Eh? Get it. Get it?

I'll see myself out.

Seals of forgotten time needs an update

Great story so far

Awesome story thank you for the update :)

It is natural energy that he is controlling not chakra nature chakra or sage chakra only ocurrs if he takes it in and mixes it with his own chakra.

The summary doesn't say anything about him joining kumo. I was kind of hoping naruto would stay as a missing nin / bounty hunter.

a pleasant surprise that u returned to writing. About your question I think you should at least write several more chapters for this story to get into "shape" before spreading your time between other stories. new ideas is okay too but preferably near the completion of 1 or more ongoing stories. it's much more enjoyable to read 1 story with frequent updates than 5 with rare ones.

brilliant i loved it

You are good at what you do please keep it up