Reviews for Just Between Us
Hmz0975 chapter 28 . 7/27
I loved this story! This is my second time reading it. I especially loved your portrayal of Edward. Never read such an amazing version of his. The concept of a triad pairing was very interesting. Thanks for sharing this with us!
NazaKaos chapter 31 . 6/9
This story was so amazing! Thank you so much for writing it. I loved the dynamics of all the relationships and the plot was great.
bmcwhorter7379 chapter 13 . 5/29
Gah! I hate Alice!
Lemonmelons chapter 27 . 4/10
Thanks!

That was fun reading. Though the ending was too sugary for my liking, and Bella overpowered, I really liked the development of Peter's triad.
rachel625 chapter 31 . 11/26/2019
Wow this story has been amazing! I loved Bella in this story! The whole story was very unique and interesting to read!
ObsidianDraconis chapter 31 . 9/16/2019
I’m glad she’s dead. And at Jasper’s hand too. This was a fun story.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 30 . 9/16/2019
That was the greatest thing ever! They’re evil! Bahahahaha
ObsidianDraconis chapter 29 . 9/16/2019
Oh Edward, you manwhore. Lmao
ObsidianDraconis chapter 28 . 9/16/2019
I said ancestor like a dork. I meant descendant. Good thing the FFN app lets me review more than once a chapter.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 28 . 9/16/2019
Oh now I need an outtake of them meeting their third! And you had me in tears reading about Jasper and his childhood home. I need them finding that ancestor too.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 27 . 9/16/2019
They’re allllll happy now and it makes me happy. Poor Jake, led astray by the snake he should have been the most wary of. Oh well, can’t change the past. Glad Carlisle and Aro are dead. Buh bye.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 26 . 9/16/2019
Well at least they got their shit out of the way. I knew he pissed Bella off hard. Lmao. She taught him a thing or two didn’t she. I have a feeling Carlisle told them of the triad, but also that she’s human. He has no idea she’s turned. This should become interesting, especially when she breaks those bonds. Aro is going to regret the day he ever met Carlisle Cullen. I can’t say I wish Aro had killed him because then we wouldn’t have the others. I’m actually liking this Edward. *gasp*
ObsidianDraconis chapter 25 . 9/16/2019
Well fuck is right. There was hope I was wrong, but...damn. Stupid Carlisle, very very fucking stupid.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 24 . 9/16/2019
Jasper’s right, now there isn’t anyone to take it from him Sam will be a good leader. He won’t assume a red-eye is bad simply because they’re red-eyed and he’ll be fair to his pack. I hope he can find as much happiness as Jasper has. I’m glad they won’t totally lose their friendship. Poor Peter, it’s just gonna take time. As for Carlisle, I think Bella is right, and I think I know exactly how they’re gonna hear from him.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 23 . 9/16/2019
Can we go every day. They’ve created a nympho. Lmao
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