Did u have to end it like dat? Damn

Holy house-elves! That was beautiful and the ending so poignant. Wow, just wow!

Honestly, it was great. They stayed in character which is great. Maybe you could add another chapter or write a sequel? :)

Really good! You should continue this! ;)

This was a really good
Chapter can you make a
Sequel or a
Second chapter just to show how they react to when he comes back. I def think their reaction would be more heartfelt and sincere and diff because they got together at grimwald place