PLEASE uPDATE!

I loved da story. Twas good. Tomato.

Ah, I loved it! The dialog... I don't really know how to explain it but it's like you get the words perfectly like how the characters would say. And because of that I read them and actually imagine their voices like how they are in the movie! That's a pretty hard thing to manage but somehow you did.
Honestly this was a good way to help Jack I reckon. I like the realistic take you took to everything. You know, how he was uncomfortable with being hugged for too long. The emotions of everyone. It was great!
So yeah, thanks for uploading :)

Oh my god, I'm an idiot. Ya' know TheMuffinBuddies? How she said she almost posted as her other account? Well that was me and I thought I was posting as this account. I am so stupid.

Aww, your summary did not lie, this entire little story was sad :(
But it was also well written :)
I really enjoyed the 5 chapters that you published to the internet and I hope to read more of your works in the future :)

Oh it wasn't bad! I liked it!
I almost posted this review as my other account that would've been dumb lol
Poor Jack, all cornered with no where to go, well I guess I have to read the next chapter to se how this confrontation goes, huh?

At least he had cookies.

Hurry!

Well first of all Im gonna say that I'll have to disagree with you. It doesn't suck! Seriously! I liked it! And if that doesn't convince you well at least you updated SOMETHING. I mean that's better than nothing in my opinion. Anyway so yeah, I liked it. Looking forward to the next chapter!

STOP DOWNING YOUR SELF YOUR WRITINGS GREAT!

I shall eagerly await the next chapter! I'm officially hooked!

Thank I'm patiently waiting for the next chapters

Ohhh Jack's not gonna like this when he finally snaps back to his senses.
This is how it'll probably go. (In a nutshell)
Guardians- Jack we are worried about you, why were you crying earlier? Are you alright?
Jack- Whaaa-? I wasn't crying! Why would you think that? *gives carefree smirk*
Guardians- *frowny face* Jack. We found you out in the middle of that storm, curled up and crying your eyes out.
Jack- Huh? How did you-? Why would you-? Ugh! You were hallucinating!
Guardians- Jack... Tell us
Jack- NO
Guardians- TELL US NOW *tries to grab him*
Jack- *running* NEVER
Guardians- We care so much about you please tell us!
Jack- *thinks it over, has a heart to heart with himself, lets the sappy side win* Okay... *takes deep breath and explains EVERYTHING* and I can't really tell whats going on when I'm in one of my jags, it's just sorta... surreal I guess
Guardians- *burst out laughing... errm I mean, stare at Jack with pity and sadness before going for Group hug* We're so sorry Jack, we hope you know that you can always come talk to us. You don't have to hide your feelings anymore.
JackGuardians- YAY HAPPY FAMILY FLUFFEH ENDING!
and that is how the next chapter will possibly go... Thats the short version anyways. :D
Hope you post the next chapter soon! I want to see how close I am :)

Thanks! I like my username too, haha. And yours also actually. Unicorns are awesome :3
But yeah, thanks for uploading, once again I did enjoy this chapter. Ah, poor Jack. I feel so sorry for him.

love it!1