this is so sweet, I love this piece!

Aww, this is just too cute! x)

Short but sweet :) Good job with this. I'm especially impressed because I can't write a slice-of-life fic to save my life, haha. But you have a nice writing style as well :D

soo cute XD

very cute .

DAAAAAAWWWW! So sweet!

I really really liked this little fic. It was slow and pretty. :)

Thank you for wrote it

I got cavities from reading this. I regret nothing! I love the interaction between May and Brendan and adore how you write. Lovely, lovely one-shot.

Short, sweet, romantic, full of secret desire, and - best of all - well written. Even though its a mere oneshot request, I think you wrote a nice piece here, showing us all the greatly beautiful story of an equally beautiful shipping.

al;ksdjflu Oh my god, that was so adorable. I just - I just - ack. The fluff, the fluff, THE FLUFF! It was so cuuuuuuuuute!

I love the way you wrote this, too! I can't believe I didn't see that last part coming :3 I hope you continue writing more shippyfics like this! (because I love fluff :D)

I love it! This is light and cute, and absolutely what I wanted to read. Great job, and thanks again! :)

awwwwwwwwwwww great story