update soon plz loved it want more

I wanna know what happens after Teddy ask if Christian his father?

"my little angle" Good grief! It's ANGEL! Please proofread or find a beta!

It's MENTAL image, not MENTLE.

It's MINUTES, not MINUETS. LOL

"Didn't they no?" "We didn't no a thing about the baby" OMG. It's KNOW!

"to tell us that know one was to mention you again" You poor thing. It's NO ONE. How old are you?

It's NONSENSE, not NONSENCE.

You wouldn't say "The first thing me did," so don't say "The first thing me and Christian did." You should say "The first thing Christian and I did."

Also, do you really not know the difference between YOUR and YOU'RE? SMH

"Everything is all dated and recorded in diary's and baby books" The DIARIES don't own anything, so DIARY'S is incorrect. DIARIES is the form you should've used.

Good story. I can see how this would have happened if Ana had gotten pregnant at this time in the books. I also understand that he would have financially taken care of them because of his time before he was adopted. But all those years to come to terms emotionally, for a smart business man, he sure was stupid. I see Ana letting him be part of Teddy's life but don't ever see an HEA between Ana and Christian nor should there be.

ah..interesting story..to bad it was never finished

Please update this story it's so good

Stop being fucking thirsty for Christian and learn some fucking self worth and self respect you pathetic idiot. He was never there. She had to take care of her child, but you just want Christian to come in and feel like he’s owed it?! You’re a dumb ass. I bet people laugh at your dumb ass self. For being a pathetic stupid fuck. Get help.

i hope there is more

Are you going to update or is it finished ?

Please update! This story is so good

please update

Please Update!

Omg I love this

I love how Christian is coming to his own terms not being forced into them

I love Elliot and teddys relationship I kinda see that happening in the book lol (Elliot was my second fav)

I kinda wanna see Christian having to get to know teddy with them around until Ana can trust him in that way

But I kinda wanna see Dom Ana (not necessarily BDSM wise but in a way that Christian will do as she says to earn her trust for her heart back and if that means being subbmissive would he do it?