How isn’t she a virgin? I mean, I know she’s no stranger to using her body to achieve her goals or to showing her body for a laugh, but that was all visual. Since she was eight, she’s been too busy stealing. She had no time for romance and considering she was almost always around pirates, who she loathed, I can’t see her willing to give her chastity to them as it was simply unnecessary. Unless you’re implying she had some flings since the burden of her village was lifted?

That said... in the anime she is on a cruise ship at the start. She couldn’t have known pirates would attack and she doesn’t steal from anyone but pirates, so given her presence there it’s not unbelievable that she was whoring herself out to wealthy civilians.

So Nami ain't a virgin!? I thought Luffy would be Nami's first since Nami is Luffy's first! It would have been a whole lott better! But still it is good!

This is good. Enjoy reading it. Very stick to the character of nami and luffy. I love it. Thanks for this.

I keep on referring back to your remarkable story and can't help but respond to your belief. Your approach is how Nami and Luffy don't have everything planned out and you don't like the cliche stories about her being the Pirate Queen. But at the same time this is coming from the guy who had a dream from a young age to become the pirate king, its kind of how this whole story is predicated. He was willing to stab himself to show his commitment to the cause. Similarly, he set his eyes on Nami from day one. As much as I like the somewhat romantic atmosphere, it bothers me that you made it seem like a one time thing. Luffy doesn't work like that. Its ok for Nami to be a little scared from the big step in the relationship but not think that it works for a day. Thats what I think anyway.

Amazing story. Great narration. Overall good job.

I loved it I got a bit confused on who was talking tho. To start off on alabasta with the happiness punch and luffy is... um what’s the word uncomfortable around her is a good start to a great story if I do say so my self. Love your writing and do more!

Your name is genius.
I never even considered this before!

Cute Story :)

This is probably the most in-character smut for LuNa I've read on this site, which is awesome! I hate those fics where there get all ooc lovey-dovey. Your story is one of the best, I love how each chapter progressed!

Thank you for a great read!

sensuallettuce~

May I just say that this quote, "'...although that can't be it. He's treating you differently, too and you're totally violent!' he let out bluntly" just killed me from laughter :D This is totally something good old Luffy would say I love it lol!

This is sincerely one of the best smut I have ever read! If not the best LuNa one. And oh boy i've read a ton. Seriously, blind trust was AMAZING, now I got fantasy I didn't know I wanted.

NICO ROBIN IS A PERV CONFIRMED

I loved this so much :D I would have liked to see how the crew would finding out (especially since Robin was spying), but oh gosh I could literally see Sanji going on a mutinous rampage for a little bit before slumping to deck to bawl his eyes out because his captain defiled his Nami~.

(Of course, we all know that in actuality it was Nami that defiled Luffy...(_" ))

But anyways, excellent job!

I love how you ended this~! Didn't drag it on longer to end up making it tedious, and yeah, who knows the future? This is by far one of the most realistic to canon fanfics about sex that I have ever read. I sure hope you write more stories with these two. There aren't enough quality ones! :D

I'm glad you wrote this chapter! It gives insight into the characters, and Luffy's very obvious lack of knowledge.. which I think is the most realistic considering his canon character! Love the awkwardness!

Good story :)