I would love for them to have a child!MAybe even two! OR maybe Dili and their child will get together? Maybe the child will have Kili's black hair with Fili's blue eyes or the other way around!Please continue the story!

the story is lovely! i wished you would have also written about how they got a child of their own! but still enjoyed it very much :)

i'd be willing to wait for you decision if you're really going to give them a child. Curious as to say, how it's suddenly going to come by in their efforts. This is nice. I like how things have progressed. And it still saddens me about the death of Thorin….anyway, that fact in Tolkien's book would forever haunt me. .

Please give them a kid, please please please please!? Pleeeeeeeaaaassssse...*cue Kili's puppy dog eyes*
But I seriously love this story and the characterization, the sun and stars tattoo's were just so sweet! And the rainy days metaphor...hehehehe, excellent touch! Keep writing please...your stories are ace!

Hmm I wouldn't give them a child. . . You made it seem so logical, but I don't know. To me it would just be too weird. But this is your story isn't it? Very well written :)

ngl I was shocked to see that this updated. Then I flailed.

'Of course he was already awaken. Nobody was awaken before the sun.' - Beautiful, but both 'awakens' should be 'awake' :)

"Shine for me at lunch?" - Lovely!

"Now get descent, you can't expect to teach him how to shoot an arrow without any pants on." - LOL and 'dressed' instead of 'descent'

DILI IS ADORABLE

'SUN-BROTHER' AHHH FKHDSJFHSDF

'And Dili was furious because his older brothers went to play hide and seek without warning him first.' - Fitting fhkdshfskdf

Lovely work :) For Shai Hulud! -salute-

Hi hon! Long time no see! Sorry to hear that you had trouble with your computer :-( Thank you so much for updating, this chapter was so good! I'm super in love with Dili! More please! :-)

I don't like the idea of Fili and MY Kili being a couple (they're brothers and it just sounds wrong in my head) but the way you've written this is so FLUFFY that I couldn't help but love it! Please update soon so I can read the fluffiness!

For the record, I absolutely think you should give them a child, but you're the author.

I'm so glad to see more of this story, and to hear that you haven't left this fandom! I love your interpretation of the boys. In this chapter especially, your descriptions of Fili through Kili's eyes are wonderful. They really show how much Kili adores Fili, and how much Fili is the center of his world.

Also Dili is adorable. And it's good to see that even if this miracle doesn't work out between Fili and Kili, there's still a successor in place.

*squealing and flailing* OMFG! This was great! I loved reading it. Excellent job! :D

absolutely loved this! I've read all you stories and I completely adore your portrayal of Fili and Kili's relationship! Desperately hope you keep writing such amazing stories, I cannot get enough of them

I can't control my feelings. This was fucking beautifully poetic, and just overall gorgeous. I loved it to pieces. So much. I would throw in a Dune reference except I can't because your fic has just given me a giant punch of FEELINGS.

Loved it! I love "Surviving-the-Battle-of-the-five-armies" fics, and you have such a wonderful writing style. You always makes me feel for the characters and the moods of things in your fics. And for my part I have no problem with the length of this, I think you pulled it of great. It was interesting all the way through and your writing has such a flow and connection that makes it a joy to read! Hope you write another one soon, I'll be looking forward to it!

I just have to write a review! I read all your stories and I love your characterization. Keep up the good work and I hope there will be some more stories with Fili, Kili, Thorin and Co.

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*ahem* that was good. seriously. new head canon? i think yes.