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Awww! Sai is such a little sweetheart! 3

Interesting...

Poor Kohana...Danzo must die...

make peace with your god now, danzo, BECAUSE KOHANA IS COMING FOR YOUR NECK!

Dayum! Can't wait to see how this turns out!

Keep up the good work!

Hell Yeah!

My Response to TheRightWayAgain:
I apologize if you feel this isn't where it should be, but I'm not changing where it belongs. I was very clear on the fact that there would be Naruto/Hinata. Like most stories there must be a build up of newly introduced characters so that the readers have a chance to connect to the new characters. If you had read the description it would have clued you into the fact it was about Naruto AND Naruto's sister, so flaming it for the first few chapters alone is uncalled for. If you don't like it, there are plenty of other stories out there for you to read. While you may not find it enjoyable because you judge a story based on other's reviews, there are others who do enjoy the story. So, thank you for your input but kindly ignore any more of my stories. They are very obviously not for you.

Typical OC story where they get most of the author's attention and story time. Also not sure why this is in the Naruto/Hinata section when once again Naruto does not seem like a main character let alone Hinata. That's not for pairing purposes, but to let us readers know who the main characters of the story are, or at least in this case supposed to be because Naruto and Hinata are not the main characters. Now I know why this has such little response for an alleged Naruto/Hinata story.

For those like myself that read the reviews before digging into a story. This is not a Naruto/Hinata story. If anything it should be tagged Gaara/OC.

Good stuff, once again. Hope to see more soon!

Great work as of now, I wonder what will happen when Naruto learns that Kohana is his twin sister and see has been with Gaara since she escaped from Danzo with help from Sai. Will Naruto and Gaara lose their friendship or will it strenghten because Gaara has prepare Kohana to fight agianst the Akatsuki

It's a good story so far. it's mess up, not only Naruto have a twin sister. But she know more about their perents than he does. Man he will be piss when he find out that not only he have a sister, that Gaara knowing Nauto had
bad child hood like him and he keeping her away from him. I don't want to in Gaara shoes when Naruto find he loose Naruto friendship because of it? If I was Naruto, I will be upset about the facts not only they
not telling about mine perents, mine clan and a living sister. Wonder why Naruto have trust issuse.

Nice! Can't wait to see more, m'friend!

as someone who had favorited the story when it was posted under queen hinata, i have high expectations for this series, and personally, I can hardly wait for naruto and kohana to tell sauske to "get in line" when he goes all "I must avenge my clan" on danzo. it will be most interesting when naruto explains how the betrayal he and his fraternal(i believe that is the proper term) twin sister expirienced goes far deeper than the one sasuke is ranting about.

Great start, I like it. but for some reason I think Kurai or Kohana is related to Naruto than Gaara