Reviews for Galaxy Fall
Not A Bagel chapter 38 . 8/14/2013
Wow, what a great ride.
My one complaint is you should have dragged out shepard thinking she was doomed, in order to ramp up the tension.
(Also think I missed a chapter)
Not A Bagel chapter 35 . 8/1/2013
Finally got around to reading this and glad I did, can't wait for it to kick off! :)
Not A Bagel chapter 34 . 7/26/2013
This was a good chapter, but I can't help feeling I missed something
Not A Bagel chapter 33 . 7/21/2013
Pregnant?
Holy shit I did not see that coming...
S1 Skipper chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
"A bridge almost swung across her and decapitated her" I'm not sure if you know what decapitated means.
JohnP87 chapter 32 . 7/15/2013
I got a bad feeling that the admrial they found will start to attack them after getting her back to the Normandy let's hope that does not happen
Not A Bagel chapter 32 . 7/15/2013
Not got the time or the motivation to give you along review buddy. Keep up the good work.
Not A Bagel chapter 31 . 7/11/2013
I have no cllue who that is...
But if you're asking for faults I find next to none in this chapter - perhaps the use of torpedos but that's more personal to me. since I dont buy the idea of a ballistic missile managing to hit a spaceship maneuvering at such speed.
The Fic is well written and I dont think you should develop an inferiority complex over blueninja's work. It's hard for people to pick your fic out of all the thousands on the site. you'll get lucky eventually and when you do you'll have hundreds of fans reading this.
JohnP87 chapter 30 . 7/4/2013
I like how the story is going so far it is getting intense it looks like Shepard is going to need all the help for the final battle is going to be rough
Not A Bagel chapter 30 . 7/3/2013
Kick Ass chapter, looking forward to Nathan vs Abby 2 :)
Not A Bagel chapter 29 . 6/25/2013
"The Humour Before The Storm" Has to become a thing...
Not A Bagel chapter 27 . 6/15/2013
I picked a great chapter to come back to ,
Got damn I love salarians and you write Palin like a perfect salarian
Not A Bagel chapter 23 . 5/21/2013
Awesome chapter I love the Cameron and Ash dynamic.

(also typo - should be static not "statistic" during the quarian call)
Not A Bagel chapter 22 . 5/10/2013
I feel this was rushed from you Foley,
I expected you to go a LOT more into detail with the resistance and I looked forward to it...
Not A Bagel chapter 21 . 5/7/2013
I really wanna see James beat the hell out of Male Shep...
Would be enlightening
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