I love your story. Jane really is too clever for his own good sometime. You should write more Mentalist stories. I love all the small details you put in your story. Like the neighbor with a telescope!

Thanks for finishing it and thanks for the read.

Don't leave Jane and us in the darkness...Please, we got to have the next chapter soon, this is killing us...LOL I thought Dante wanted Jane to teach him the training on being a psychic. Killing Jane off now would'nt be a smart move. Kill the teacher before he teaches..well, the guy is off his rocker anyway, Everyone knows there is not such thing as psychics...

Simply. The. Best.
I MUST read a new chapter soon, please.
The characters are pretty convincing.

Please, whatever you do, MAKE SURE THIS FIC GETS FINISHED! I really want to know what happens, and Im in for some Jane pain/whump and awesome hero Lisbon&Co.

That was quite a change. You have been busy. It was very good.

Jane is shot- all of a sudden, when the game hasn't even begun! And the team haven't got a clue about his captor _ I wonder how he will get himself out of this situation.

Who texted the last message from Jane's phone to Lisbon then?

OH damn. Jane a victim again.

I see you have a new version of your story - well, it explains more things to readers. I think you're pretty good at describing the details of the crimes and the way Jane deduces from them. I like the kind of case-based stories like this. Keep up the good work!