I love this! Why couldn't we have gotten a scene like this on the show? Thx for the great Lauriver fluff!

I realize you wrote this ages ago but I really liked it! I think Laurel’s actions and ability to figure things out here made perfect sense, and I’m so glad Oliver didn’t push her away at the end. Thanks so much for sharing this!

I had to read this again. I miss this ship.

Ohh you could continue your story

I wish this had been on the show already!

Excellent she should figure it out!

Eee! Thanks!

This is great! Language and story-wise! [:

keep going! :)

Nice story wonder if something like this will happen in the show.

Extremely well written with fabulous grammar and diction. An overall awesome piece. Please do more Laurel or Laurel/Oliver. I was wondering if you could write one where she slowly starts becoming Black Canary (another superhero - who she most likely will turn into) But don't have that as a sequel to this one; more like a completely different story line. You're a great writer, please consider my request. Love Laurel/Ollie!

Nice, when writing this first chapter you let nothing slip; great work! Love Ollie/Laurel.

I soooo love this! It's so true, there aren't enough Lauliver fics which was also my gripe on Smallville's with Dollie fics. I have my favorites authors there and now you are on my short list here. I love the emotion with every word I read. It was beautiful and true. If Arrow doesn't want to get these two together then I will get my fill in your stories so please keep it up.

Omg! This was awesome seriously! Great story 333

Waaaa so amazing