I think that it's safe to say that this'll never be touched again, but it was good while it lasted. Shame, I would've loved to see more of this.

Awesome story this is going somewhere you have reached my topten! Congrat that is no simple task. Please continue...
-hi

it was goood

Did dan die? Or did he turn into a bakugan by his wounds?

What happened to Dan Kuso?

Lol, Total, " my ass, I'm a Cairn Terrier!" XD Sadly I don't know much about total since it's been awhile since Maximum Ride reading I've put off for a long while. Characters are spot on so you're doing good, I didn't spy any grammar or spelling errors so overall great chapter and I'll read the new one as soon as it comes out.

"Ninjas. It HAD to be ninjas."
Oh, Total, I love you...even if you "didn't" take the guy's hotdog ;) Great Chapter Alari, can't wait for the next one *and the ones for the others! :)*

Despite Dan not being mentioned at all in the chapter and what not. Well we do need a break from our Brawling Hero Champion. Great chapter although it got confusing to when Nudge and Iggy are trying to regroup with Max and the others. Are they alone now? Iggy and Nudge I mean, because it's a little unclear if they split from Linus, Ren, and Alice. Yay! Linus! He hardly shows up, well in any of the fanfics I've read or written. He so handsome too! *squeals* Sorry ; fangirl moment. Ahem, aside from that I take it the whole gang gave up looking for our missing Pyrus brawler? Anyway still can't wait for Miyoko to turn up! Maybe Shinjiro as well? So much mystery! Good thing too! This'll definitely keep people wanting to read more! I know I'm craving the next chapter, but update when you can and have the time. I understand it gets annoying seeing reviews that only say, UPDATE SOON PLEASE! All the time. - sorry for the rant there.

what about Dan and drago

Oh Runo is so going to be pissed we she meets Drayna. Can't wait again for next chapter, very interesting and I can't wait for the following interactions. Good transitions by the way.

My goodness, I know Ari to be a jerk, but I'm surprised he went that far. Then again his orders need to be more clearer on how they want their target. Though I'm wondering the same thing Ari was contemplating, what does his company truly want with Dan. Poor Drago...won't know what happened to his friend for a long while it seems.