Reviews for Albus Potter and the Cunning Plan
Sakubaby734 chapter 24 . 10/7/2019
So, I presume you won't finish your story... damn... I really love reading it... but I wish and want to see Albus and Scorpius together. But not so "easily". I mean, I like some lovey dovey stuff in all those mysteries adventures, kind of shojo things in it like, as Albus has some kind of popularity towards girls, one of them, I think especially, Summerby, makes her révélation and Al decide to date her and when Scorps learns it, he was so angry but also upset and very sad but decide not telling is father. He becomes more closed to Orion but not his best friend and after some weeks or months, Al finally notice this and get into fight with Scorps but reconciliate after. And et cetera. And finally, at the 5 or 6 years they finally ending up together. I really expected I could read the end of your fanfic but hélas... however, it's still a good one but without ending...
aemilyl24 chapter 25 . 8/16/2016
This is such a great story! I've loved reading it. I do notice that you haven't updated since 2014, I do hope it isn't abandoned. I hope you will update this story. Keep up the great work!
HugsandBugsSmileyface chapter 25 . 1/22/2016
I beg of you. More.
Melissa the kawaii yandere chapter 16 . 12/18/2015
The last letter had me dead Xd
Melissa the kawaii yandere chapter 9 . 12/18/2015
LMAO When Ron said "is this normal?" I died XD
TheAnnoyingTallThing chapter 25 . 9/8/2015
Well this story is totally amazing. Im looking forward to the next few chapters, although I honestly think that either you aren't using Fanfiction anymore or you've discontinued the story. I honestly hope Im wrong it's more like not getting time, because after reading something this good, with an actual shot at plot, I will be devastated if it does end.
I love almost everything about the story, the few things o don't being the constant hufflepuff bashing, because even though I'm a slytherin and also believe that hufflepuff is pretty useless, I don't think its too appropriate to always be making fun of it, not to mention it gets old after a while. Also, you mention everyone's surprise at Al being in Slytherin way too much. But other than that, love it. Great plot, superb characters, and a totally fabulous read. I wish to reward you with an Internet cookie. So here
Also, I really do hope you aren't dead or something, and I hope you're well and all. To find out whether I'm crazy or not, if really appreciate it if you sent a reply, even if it's just a line saying That you aren't gonna finish it. So bye, and keep writing and stuff.
AliceCullen3 chapter 25 . 6/9/2015
LOVE IT!
Sofia chapter 25 . 5/20/2015
This is so brililiant! I appreciate your work and can't wait for the next chapters.
avidaaxelelle chapter 25 . 3/23/2015
Loving the story so far. Took me 3 days to read all the chapters :)
GeminiWolff chapter 25 . 12/14/2014
I really hope you start updating more recent coz I really like it plus I think I know who Harrys mystery contact is
GeminiWolff chapter 24 . 12/14/2014
Few shall we say political errors. Punk is a type of rock music called obviously Punk Rock. also THE GREAT CULL is a rock band not a song according to my sources namely my emo, screamo, heavy metal, punk loving brother.
GeminiWolff chapter 21 . 12/13/2014
Just a couple typos in this one I spotted 1). We "shalln't" worry about it until our second year begins. Its meant to be shan't not shalln't due to contraction of shall not. 2) "good olde days" I think you meant "good ol' days" as it is used in description of well the past. And yes I know I'm crazy for find your typos
GeminiWolff chapter 6 . 12/12/2014
Ok my OCD just kicked in and sorry but you keep getting mixed up with Effect and Affect. Effect is a noun. Affect is a verb. Effect means outcome, consequence, or appearance. Affect is the transformation of the noun to a verb. Again I am trully sorry
GeminiWolff chapter 5 . 12/12/2014
I just noticed a pun in the note it said you're not a huge fan of hagrid. I like it coz hagrid is big. Don't worry I'm not a fan hagrid. I prefer the Malfoy's especially Scorpius
1ma100kin4814sh chapter 25 . 11/27/2014
I have really enjoyed this so far but started following this story just over a week ago and I noticed it had been a while since before than that you had updated and once I start to read something I can't wait overly long I between reads personally I find it makes it harder to follow the story so I thought I'd ask you to please update soon.
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