It's a bit funny but error izaya it's on May 4~ not March~ anyways great so far~!

My name is Leyla too! (Lay-la)

Update soon! hehe this story is so cute! (im a very yaoi smut person...) i know his personalities are gone at the end of the chapter and all... but for ideas...i can see roppi and hiyabi like... molestering shizou and bein all seme sexy and yell at shizou saying "on your knees and suck!" but izaya is all uke:3. then psyche... omg psyche would like innocently rape shizou by liking a sucker in front of him and shizou can t help himself! also.. I was wandering of that ice pop idea was from kingdom hearts? Thats what it reminded me of... :3 anyways... love you and the story! :D

Ok I really like the idea of this fic, I have read all of this story, but I did get annoyed with the plot holes you had. There was no development between the two to get into a relationship. Shizuo just immediately jumps on the band wagon. Izaya attempts to push it away by the three personalities, but he was already in love it seems. I don't see how this relationship came to be. Also where is this setting. I assume a hospital in the mental ward, but if that's the case, Izaya physical wouldn't be able to leave the building. Shizuo would have to be a nurse other than just taking the job. Izaya's room shouldn't have a couch within it. It would be in a rec room. The last thing I was going to talk about it is the characters. The personality more or less kept to canon, but Shizuo did not. Where is his quick temper and strength? Izaya I can see could act this way. OKAY. I FEEL THAT I TRASHED YOU BUT THAT WAS NOT WHAT i WAS GOING FOR! You have wonderful idea, but I feel this story can be better with a bit of tinkering. If you want ask me any questions I don't have an account but you can talk to me through author's note if you wish. I am not trying to be a flamer. I just want to help you improve as a storyteller. Till next time.

P.s. Don't be discouraged over what I wrote, Please.

AGHHHH UPDATE SOOOOON
;A; facking cliffhanger nuu

Ahahaha Izaya is ze winnderr! X'DD! LOOOOOOOOOL! Haha, that made me happy X'DD! Thanks for writing! :'DD

It's a great story! I love it 3

Maybe you could put in some more drama to continue the story? Like Shinra finding out about their love and Shizuo gets fired? And Izaya doesn't know what to do, so he goes back to his other personalities and it's almost impossible to talk to the real Izaya? Maybe?

Keep up the good work!

You should make a chapter about Izaya's recovery, possibly of later when Izaya gets released from the institution and maybe moves in with Shizu-chan? and how the other three are no longer there? So happy! I love this story :3

What now? We need to know more of Izaya past and how he become a whole again!

AHHHH IM SO EXCITED! X'DDDD! LOOOL! Gah! We finally get to see how Shizuo reacts to Izaya ;DD! Hehehe.. Thanks for updating! :'DD!

Yayy! I can't wait for the next one! I'm so excited o

OMFG TTHIS IS SO FREAKING GREAT X'DD I DONT KNOW HOW TO DEAL WITH FEELS! X'DD! LOOOL! Thank you for writing! i cant wait for the next chapter! :'D!

Omg! I was soo good. Poor Shinra :D

Say 'ello to da bad guy(scarface voice) ahh cant wait till the next roppi

Yesss! xD I knew Shizu-chan could do it! He just had to do as he was asked :3 . Roppi..dunno how that'll go. Excited to see Izaya's turn though. *cough yaoi cough* They'll all win! Cuz Shizu-chan loves all of Izaya3