Reviews for Gifted
NaDiaGa chapter 82 . 7/19
I guess this is definitely abandoned now... I gotta say Bella handled the whole immortal thing with Rose the worst way ever! She should have said something at the beginning, it was cruel letting Rose in the dark and then the way she rejected her at the three the absolute worst (ever heard of breaking it easy or gently?) and she has the nerve of being angry that she left after that? Wtf!?

After the threesome in Seattle I really thought she changed her mind and was going to ask for Rosalie’s forgiveness otherwise doesn’t really makes sense her going back to forks... and all those internal conflicts could be solved if she really talked with Rose but she just keeps bottling everything up uhrrg!

I really think being a vampire would help her with her powers.. maybe she has all this trouble cause her human body can’t really adapt to the “monster”.

Damn I started this hoping I’ll get to see some kind of culmination of the romance from tossing stones 2.. sad to see very few good stories get to be completed.
EccentricRage chapter 82 . 7/8
Hello,

I can't even begin to put into words the emotional roller coaster this story has taken me on! I've cried, I've laughed, I've raged, my heart has raced in fear and excitement, and I've been an eager mess the last two days at work waiting for breaks and to be done my shift to keep reading this story.

I'm rarely in the mood for Rose/Bella/Emmett, but when I am, I love deep stories like this and boy oh boy has this one hit the spot! There is...SO much development on all fronts, and you've made several hard choices plot wise that have definitely paid off no matter how tough they were (emotionally) to read.

I love what you've done with Jacob. It breaks my heart when he's characterized as the broken hearted little boy who couldn't take friendzone for an answer. You gave him a solid issue to work through on top of a beautiful friendship that wasn't complicated by a messy love triangle, and I absolutely adore it.

I love Emmett's characterization and his and Bella's relationship. You've shown him to be more that an immature kid, and the way you write him is amazing.

I love the substance you've given to Esme's relationship with Bella, and how it's more than "I love you as a mother and food is supposed to prove that." You've given such depth to their relationship, and it makes me jealous to be honest. That's a good sign of writing right there!

I also love that Carlisle isn't the perfect all knowing leader that can do wrong. He's made mistakes and had to suffer the consequences.

Jasper is perfect. I love the way he loves Bella and is fighting for her, and what you've done with his ability and interpersonal relationships is awesome.

Alice is a joy, and the playful way you work her knowing too much about everyone into the story is awesome.

Edward...oh boy. I love and hate what you've done with him because you've actually given him substance but I want to set him on fire because of how angry he makes me. Allow me to rephrase: I love what you've done with him and I hate him because of who he is in this. You've done a great job showing what being stuck at 17 with such a narcissistic attitude can be like given the base line he grew up with.

I'm loving the conflict with the other pack, and I'm loving the BAMF brotp Bella and Jacob are evolving into.

I can't lie, my heart broke when I saw that AN as the last chapter and realized that it's been five years since you've updated.

I can understand falling away from something, however, and I fervently hope that you'll come back to this story in time.

Bella is such a complex character in this story, and while I can't see a happy ending in sight, I'm so interested in knowing how this ends. The struggle she has and continues to go through, the growth she continues to do, the way she struggles so much between malicious apathy and sorrowful joy...god I'd love to know how this ends.

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for what you have given us, because boy oh boy was this a read and a half. The effort you've put into this is absolutely astounding and you have my respect.

I hope that one day you'll come back to this, or perhaps post another chapter with an outline of where you saw this going if you don't think your muse will ever strike again, but I totally understand if you don't do either.

Thank you again for sharing this, and I hope you, your relationship, and job are still going well 3
Guest chapter 82 . 7/1
Phenomenal story. Really bummed it didnt continue the subplot was taking a few interesting twists. Very good writing thanks for posting.
LNI chapter 1 . 6/18
You "beseeching" us to let go of our assumptions and discomfort convinced me to give this story a try. I hope to be wonderfully surprised...either way good luck !
Sdimpels chapter 82 . 5/17
so, what happened to the I AM NOT ABANDONING THIS STORY its been 5 years. just mark it as abandoned, I read this story and was heart broken when I got to the end to see your anthers note
Sodapop4me2004 chapter 82 . 5/13
Looking forward to the rest of the story
Guest chapter 82 . 5/10
Amazing. I await hopeful for the next chapter
Alishira chapter 1 . 5/3
I can only agree with lemon
Please continue this amazing story
Lemonmelons chapter 82 . 5/2
Hey, although you stopped writing years ago, on the off chance you'll read this: thank you for gifted, I truly enjoyed this story and the development of your Bella.

Maybe one day you'll come back to her, I'd certainly appreciate it. Thanks for giving poly relationships a chance!
Lemonmelons chapter 75 . 5/2
Oh Rose. So much pain
Lemonmelons chapter 59 . 5/2
Really starting to wonder what caused all the fires
Lemonmelons chapter 58 . 5/2
Hm i don't think it would make people suspicious if Rose were to hold Bella's hand in school - after all, Alice does it all the time.
Lemonmelons chapter 48 . 5/1
Oh I really wonder why Carlisle and Esme don't see the shoot their son is up to.
Lemonmelons chapter 44 . 5/1
Ohi how Charly findsa way to heal and someone to talk to about the whole mess
Lemonmelons chapter 37 . 5/1
Thanks you so much for "baring your soul"to us in the form of finally letting them get to it! And thanks for your story. Yes, for me too tossing stones made this pairing possible and I do like your version of it as well as your Bella!
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