Lana is fucking pathetic. I hate characters like that... weak in mind and soul, no spine, no strength to stand up for herself and others...

Great story

This is the best story ever! I love it so much

Hey wow this was really good. I usually stay away from sister fics I get so tired of it always being Elena twin stories. This was different! I'm off to read the sequel!

To było fajne, ale nie lubię całej sprawy z aniołami. :D

I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH I'M SQEALING LIKE A FREAKY FANGIRL OHEMGEEEEEEEEEE!
Sorry about that... I just really, realllllly loved this story to the moon and back!
This was just plain amazing- thank you SO MUCH for writing this; I truly enjoyed it!

I have to compliment the title I LOVE pierce the veil

OH MY GOD! This story is perfect! I think it's the best one I've read so far!

so she is an angel...interesting

this was an awesome chapter :-)

interesting :) I didnt think of her cutting herself... I was thinking something else (more hospital like)...yeah it will be interesting

hi :) is Lana Kols mate? are mate real in your story? I think it would be cute...and it would explayn why he is soooo into her :) and his siblings are nice to her too (they smile so knowingly at her) ...or is it something else all together? :) yeah I like this your story a lot

its better and better with each chapter

this is so sad :( will Kol help her to smile? :-)

Awe I lived this story! And the fact that it was named after a pier e the veil song!