| Reviews for Dream Chaser |
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Nekuro Yamikawa chapter 17 . 6/12/2019 The last three chapters feel like a happy roller coaster, i can enjoy the ride but suffer from emptiness once it was done. I mean, too much stimulus to pointed on. If any, which i can grasp from these interesting things in this recent chapter is, the part when Rin decide to give him new name. If Jin transcending the limit of possibilities, then Asin have limitless possibilities. Jin was able to do what is deemed impossible in his own limitations, when Asin everchanging in what he can achieve. Without his wits he wouldn't survive, following silver knights model is suicide. And i guess, they had done well to chase away the bad dreams they suffer for all these years, rather than chasing it for futility. Lastly, Congrats and many thanks for your efforts to bring the story to it's proper end after all those years. |
Jin chapter 17 . 6/8/2019 I did not regret stumbling on this site. You did an amazing job in making the characters seem close to the game. And that last part, God. I never shipped sone of the characters that came after ley but now I wished I got to use them on the pc version. I love that Asin wasnt going to chase after the vajras and decided to fulfill his masters wish in his own way. Do continue, it was very nice :) |
YEET chapter 17 . 6/7/2019 HEWWO IS THE FIC DONE? TYVM FOR WRITING THIS. Ive been searching from all Corners of the earth for asin and rin fics and yours are beautiful. Tysm for writing this. I wish the fic continue tho YwY |
AFreeze chapter 16 . 5/29/2019 And thus the dance of Wind and Rain commences. Apotheosis and Hair troubles, fun... And Garden Shears, oh my... |
Nekuro Yamikawa chapter 16 . 5/28/2019 can't help myself to grin and gigling silently through the start, up to when they got busted in somewhat awkward situation. Mari didn't seem troubled? in my opinion, she is a girl with mannequin face, nothing to be expected. and asking Ryan who known for his loves to plants, to bring a scissors, is must be noted as mistake. but again, if it works then it's not dumb. xD to be honest there's much for me to take attention. i think i got a feast with my eyes, yeah, the dusk is still in hours, rather than hungry, I'm weak with thirst and hot air. reading this under the shadow while caressed by the breeze is a bliss. and whoa, still no "C" mark? okay, I'm okay from another doses. hmm, though perhaps, if it was all about candies, it better to be put on another tittle.D |
Guest chapter 15 . 5/10/2019 I love these three last chapters you updated. You're more fitted to write those scenes. How you craft these words and bring up the characters highlighted in the story. Jin, when his idiotic love disease didn't kick in, would bring him an image of noble. There's a limit of patience of course, per individual, but he know what and when. As for Asin, the progress to found and reshape his foothold is pleasing. To be free from his own ghost of the past. Though he still a meanie. What can you expect from a well known trouble maker, anyway? And that message wrapped in Agnesia form, rather than believe in your belief, it was more like believe in what your heart said it was must to be believed. As a mere human who constantly battling her inner demon, tempted even, giving up was not a choice. The teaching of the goddess including to cherish her friends and beloved, so she can't entirely blaming the goddess from the lack of her existence. And yeah, it was lovely to see the country-side girl bantering again with the annoying fox. |
kumoreii chapter 15 . 5/8/2019 LOVE THE NEW CHAPTERS! XBDKDNNXKXXK PLS TAKE MY HEART AND MY FIRSTBORN 3333 Also I can't seem to read Thanatos and Agnesia's dialogue ;;-;; they just show up as a bunch of squares |
AFreeze12th chapter 13 . 4/29/2019 Wow, just... This is beautiful... To finally carve your own path, be through recurring trickles from gentle rain or through a surge from storms |
A-Freeze chapter 12 . 4/23/2019 Wow... We got Roasted Pidgeon... |
asdfjkl6789 chapter 10 . 4/14/2019 DAAAMMNNN im loving this ohmygod yaasssss |
AFreeze chapter 10 . 3/28/2019 Too lazy to sign in... Oh, slowly cooking Seiggy with dark fire, why am I obsessed with roasting him... "Why so serious?" Where have I heard of that before... For a moment I though Rin would tap into healing, but then again in thus instance dark light. I'm still a bit peeved that Rin is a Healer class in GC DC... Along with Asin being almost a Jin clones (again...) And so Malevolence vs Ascension, that's one thing to look forward to. |
Nekuro Yamikawa chapter 9 . 3/18/2019 ah sorry, i got senseless there. that certainly entertaining but silly realistically. we are rushing to defeat the god, not camping inside the tower and taking leisure. about romance... hmm, i prefer it was a deepen empathy relationship. they know what suffering is when they lost the love ones. they are bond by the curse of power. the other seeking desperately, while the other afraid of it's grim consequences. and oh, almost lost from attention. i must read it carefully to know what's going on before the fight ended. Rather than keep on luring the girl to give up, it feels like the Horde forcefully impart a tiny bit of their own madness to create an another "Rin" to be witnessed by her comrades. The demon tainting the light, left the girl alone, powerlessly clutching the wind. As if to emphasizing how weak she is, abandoned by her own goddess. they keep whispering in screams. and once a slight gap open, they did it. It was quite a sight. at least, nice job to keep the story alive and upheld your word. 0.~ b about discord, yup, i have an account. xD |
A-Freeze12th chapter 9 . 3/15/2019 So I've finally remembered my account details... Miniboss complete! I do get Amy, even if for just a tiny bit. Now I'm waiting for that Seiggy Barbeque * * |
eiririin chapter 9 . 3/14/2019 Omg discord? YESSSS ID LOVE TO SCREAM ABT THIS FIC AND ASIN/RIN WITH ANYONE! |
Guest chapter 8 . 3/3/2019 Eh... I lost what I wanted to say about Jin... That smooth fight scene dodge though. If there one thing that trully bothered me, it's the AN in the middle XD |