Love it :)))

*quiet, you seem to know how to spell quietly correctly, but saying the quite house doesn't make sense, saying the housewares quiet, or the house was quite quiet would be correct, because quiet is making little noise, and saying quite means sort of...much of, for example, the tile was quite blue: most of the tile is blue. You've made quite a few errors too.

One of the best Joket/OC ever~! Thanks 3

I really enjoyed this story, and the shorts/companions after it!

I loved this story so much! You have a great way with bringing the twisted character to life and giving the Joker an equal counterpart. I am especially pleased with the good writing and few grammatical mistakes. My personal favorite part of this book was when people would call her crazy and every single time she would respond with the same thing. Absolutely brilliant! The only thing that you need to improve on is those few errors in grammar (i.e: uses of the word 'meet' are spelled 'met' and a few run-on sentences) but, all that can be fixed with some simple editing. Otherwise, this was a fantastic story and I can't wait to see what the sequel has in store!

I found this story about a year ago and every time I fancy reading a batman fic I come to this one. It's hinestly one of the best I've read, I love your writing, the character... Just everything in this story is amazing

My favourite Joker fic so far, definitely! :D

I never expected to be fascinated by an OC, but here I am, the Joker hasn't even shown up yet and I'm already hooked ehehehe~ Doll is lovely~

Delicious! I love Doll already - from her name to her personality~

Haunting In Connecticut! Love that poem.

I found this story by chance and i gotta tell you i am happy i did! I have been looking for a joker/oc fic like this for the longest time.. At the beginning i was wondering on how you where going to make the whole allison/doll thing work but you handled it quite well. I love the dynamic of joker and doll. They make an interesting pair to say the least! Lol i look forward to the sequel. Amazing story! Im actually surprised it doesn't have more reviews then it does... :)

"Multiple Personality Disorder" is called Dissociative Identity Disorder now, which I actually have. This girl does not. Your character, having one berating, psychotic voice in her head, would more aptly being described as having a split personality, not DID where the sufferer has many personalities that can forcibly control their body and often stem from a history of sexual abuse.

Granted, you must be young, but you don't seem to even know what DID is. You don't just have a single voice that berates you because it's a psychopathic persona. I hope you're not calling Allison, Katelyn and Violet separate personalities here as they're clearly just aliases, though.

If you're going to use a psychological term in a story, you need to know what it means, and it would be nice if you didn't come off as inferring that everyone with a mental disorder is a total fruitcake while you're doing it. Having DID doesn't automatically qualify someone as being legally insane or else I and plenty of people I know would be in padded cells right now.

I'm sorry if I come off as harsh, but people who clearly don't comprehend a psychological disorder shouldn't be throwing it around as if they do, regardless of it being fictional. It's offensive to many people who suffer DID and similar disorders to not only be so obviously misunderstood by you but to have the sense of being characterized falsely as a bunch of raving lunatics.

I loved this story cx The OC character and plot were awesome. Thanks for posting!

Great story, great chapter! I can't wait to read more! Please write soon!

This has got to be the best batman fanfic ever written. From the beginning it was all so interesting and each chapter would capture my attention. God, I can't express how much I love this. I had a hard time understanding Joker's mentality and his agent of chaos speech but I think I understand now. Can I just say, in risk of getting shot by Doll, that the two of them getting together was cute? I cheered when they finally admitted they cared for each other. This is beautiful, its art! It just makes so much sense and everything she did was so amazing and smart. I also loved her and Gordon's relationship. After I finished reading this story all I could think was 'I want some pizza right now.' I hope you work on those videos as I'd really love to see what Doll looks like. I kept wondering how the paint brought attention to her scars. I hope you make a sequel soon maybe include some Bane, since he has some point of views that were interesting as well. All in all Doll was a beautiful, well-rounded character and you're an amazing author. Everything you wrote just clicked in the end and really it was just awesome! Right well, I'll stop rambling now, and to conclude this I'd just like to say that I hate Harley Quinn with a passion and I'm glad she was twenty lightyears away from this story - but I will read that companion fanfic where Doll kills her. Thanks for sharing this epic fanfic with the world, I loved it!