| Reviews for Your Heart is an Empty Room |
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SamanthaAckles chapter 5 . 7/19 I really enjoyed this, I do wish Styles got his full voice back though. |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/9/2015 Wow, just wow! You're a really good writer, the way you describe things here, clearly but not too over the top and not too much. Well done! The storyline is really something, aswell. Keep it up! |
prettyredfox chapter 5 . 8/6/2013 Beautiful story. The way you said things was just fascinating and like poetry or a song, it was lovely. Really cool concept, too. |
mednin chapter 5 . 6/28/2013 Great fanfiction! Thank you for writing it! :) |
lord kiras hand chapter 5 . 6/14/2013 This story is amazing. It goes into the deepest of deep concepts; what does it mean to be alive? Also what can have a soul. This could be am awesome concept to be written out as a book. |
TsukinArchangel chapter 5 . 1/24/2013 Beautiful, just beautiful, you should publish this you'd only have to change the names |
Kiyori-chan chapter 5 . 1/22/2013 Why the holy hell does this not have more reviews? You told a more deep and profound story in five chapters than most people do in 20. Writing was beautiful, the story was beautiful, and that ending was BEAUTIFUL. And for the life of me I can't think of better adjectives. This story was truly stunning. While not the typical Sterek fare, you still captured them both so well. And I really commend you on your writing of Stiles. The odd 3rd person (or hell is that considered 2nd?) kind of threw me for a bit, but it totally worked for Stiles since he was indeed an android. His thoughts and feelings as well as his actions were just so spot on for someone experiencing things for the first time. I was kind of sad that Stiles never actually got to speak, but then again the fact that he and Derek have such a profound bond that words aren't even needed just makes me go all gooey inside. Just wow. Well done. I can do nothing but applaud. And this seriously needs more love. |
DJDarkPixie chapter 5 . 1/22/2013 GAH! You stopped? That's all? No voice? You didn't explain the mechanics of his robot, er, parts? Ahhhh! Why must you torture us so sweetly? :) I loved this... a lot... as you see. But I want more. I mean a sequel. What was the accident in this AU? Is Derek a wolf? Was that what Peter told Stiles and made him shut up about before taking his voice? Sigh... I love it. :) |
DJDarkPixie chapter 4 . 1/22/2013 Sign language... Grrrr... I hope he gets his voice. Will we ever see Sterek? He is fully functional after all. I need this go on forever... it can't be over so soon... it's too good! |
DJDarkPixie chapter 3 . 1/22/2013 Stiles without a voice... yet still Stiles. I read a fan fic where he got his vocal cords ripped out by a werewolf and it was painful. Yet this, not so much, as I hope (glare) he gets the codes. :) Love this story. |
DJDarkPixie chapter 1 . 1/22/2013 Wow. Totally new AU. Thinking of little David almost in AI or as you said, Robot. Can't wait to see the rest of the regulars. |
Elz chapter 5 . 1/21/2013 Wow. Really, wow, amazing. I loved this story so much! My favorite I must say was the first chapter, with the way it was written - really quite brilliant. I only wish it was longer! But I appreciate at the same time the perfection of having it how it is, short and sweet and tender. This is beautifully done! |
Sandra chapter 5 . 1/21/2013 I truly cannot tell you how much I loved this. It was sad, but it was a good sad. Beautiful too. I loved it. You are very good writer :) |
skittleAcullen chapter 5 . 1/21/2013 This was nice. It was strange to get a grip on Stiles inability to talk but you made it work very well. I loved it, it was poetic in a way and perfect in general. |