There are many malapropisms and grammatical errors.

Why are Dark one Belles always rapists?

And the sequel for... when?

It took me two weeks but I ended up reading it all,... it was so incredibly wonderful this story! I'm ready for the sequel!.

Allow me to disagree. Rumpel is practically a single-father (we all understand and agree of Milah's level participation extent). Not to mention the fact that he was raised by his spinners aunties. Of course they took care to leave him with the appropriate skills of self-service. It's probably not a lack of skill, but lack of food (hey, war in the yard, and not even the first. And he's mere peasant - even without a war, his budget is quite limited).

Absolutely amazing! I can't wait for the sequel

This was AMAZING. I absolutely loved the whole thing! I can't wait until the sequel! :D

Please tell me there is a sequel for this in the near future because holy crap is this fantastic.

Lovely. Just Lovely.
So many possibilities for Storybrooke - I would suspect you will keep our primaries separated (Regina would want it that way). Curious as to who will custody of the children - or will they be split up?
Can't remember if Regina promised Belle or Rumple 'comfort.' Certainly, it would be funny to Regina to reduce (at least) one of these characters to a servile position. Look forward to your sequel.

I loved every minute of this story and I look forward to the sequel. I wish I could help beta it but right now, I have no time. If no one else volunteers, I will do it for you.

I can not wait for the sequel, and I will be there to read it. Yours is one of the few RumpleBelle stories I can still stomach after the mess that is their relationship in canon happened. I hope it will happen soon.

My invetation to be a sounding board is still open if you ever need someone to bounce ideas off of.

Rumple on the warpath! Those so-called heroes better tremble!

What a great story, can't wait to read the sequel.

great chapter thank!

Very nice.