Reviews for Kisu Ben 10-a-sin |
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Zeta Grey chapter 1 . 12/8/2019 I love the idea but... I feel it could have been implemented better, it kinda feels like you're just going through the motions and skipping straight to the point, a good player never reveals his hands, but I can see everything plain as day! Don't forget those character development brownie points!~ I mean, come on, you have Gwen swaying her hips so early, and it's only the first chapter! one alluring aspect of harems is the seduction course... makes for an interesting story, and tells me why I should care... I wanted to go into more detail, but consider this my first Review. |
shanethekewldude chapter 3 . 9/29/2017 How much crack have you smoked |
dylanben955 chapter 4 . 6/19/2017 really good chapter man keep up the great work man |
Eibegraf chapter 1 . 5/8/2017 Nice, please more of this. It is hilarious xD |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/7/2017 I'm glad this is back and I like the direction it is going, any idea when you're going to be able to update it next? |
Guest chapter 4 . 12/24/2016 awesome story so far hope to see more but niko creeps me out |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2016 i like it awesome work |
jasongd chapter 4 . 10/16/2016 Good work can't wait for next chapter |
CaptainSanchez chapter 4 . 9/19/2016 Yay, this is back! |
Car45 chapter 4 . 9/15/2016 Love it so far. You've done such a great job with the conflict of his feelings for her and his attempt to deny them. And it fits that Gwen would make her choice and not look back. She just has to get him past his inhibitions. GREAT WORK. |
Smiling Lemon chapter 4 . 9/14/2016 Interesting to see and update after so long but still this is going to be fun as hell! |
lunar silver chapter 4 . 9/13/2016 Looks like Ben needs to teach his girls some discipline |
StrongGuy159 chapter 4 . 9/13/2016 Cool story continue please. |
awesomeccb chapter 1 . 8/9/2016 Nice chapter |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/13/2016 More now X3 |