Reviews for Pokemon: The Ultimate Tale
FrozenFlames12 chapter 5 . 7/3/2019
Was Pikachu named Kai after the fire ninja from Lego Ninjago? Or is that just coincidence?
Guest chapter 6 . 11/26/2017
Bulbasaur- Barney
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2017
Well wouldja look at that? It's Gary! Gary Stu to be exact! Hey there Gary, how're ya doin'? Kicking ass already in the first chapter? Wow, isn't that ab-so-lute-ly impressive! I wish I could be like you! On an account of one favor though..

Can you please get out of Ash's body?
Guest chapter 6 . 2/27/2017
amazing
DdraigTrueEmperor9 chapter 3 . 11/8/2016
This was a good chapter.
Glad that Ash didn't caught the bug pokemon, I mean what the point of a story if Ash will get the same pokemons as he did in canon.
I suggest that a Eevee, a Meowth or a Growilithe would be a great addition for Ash team.

Ash training seems to be going good, if Charmander is strong already and close to evolve.
Curious about what Ash taught his friends, the Gym battle is next let read how it goes.
DdraigTrueEmperor9 chapter 2 . 11/8/2016
This story is interesting.
Even though I don't see the need for the pokemons to have levels like the games, but that is just my opinion.
Was hoping Ash didn't get Pikachu, but he did atleast he got a Dratini, was thinking Ash forgot about the egg he had on his bag.

Well, Ash journey continue with four new friends, two pokemons and two humans.
Aritzia1998 chapter 3 . 6/4/2016
I'm really enjoying this story so far the only thing that I wouldn't say I enjoy is the accompaniment of Alex and Leaf on Ashs journey. I just feel as if they are in a way slowing him down from reaching his full potential.
Guest chapter 7 . 2/19/2016
i prefer this one and could ash get a dratini in the altenate thanks
ews1 chapter 7 . 12/4/2015
Thought this was you, Essence is a great read.
chase.wehner1 chapter 6 . 11/7/2015
great story really hope to see an update soon though
Memory25 chapter 1 . 9/10/2015
Erm...well...not exactly Red, but I guess Ash wouldn't be Ash if he weren't a LITTLE excitable. :)
mechdjinn chapter 1 . 5/10/2015
This is one of the best strong ash fanfics I have ever read. I am so disappointed that you seem to have discontinued writing fanfics (you may never even read this review. There are so few fanfics of this type that I wish there were more and that they updated more often. I will pray that you somehow continue writing or that you are happy doing whatever you are doing now.
Dan chapter 4 . 4/25/2015
Ash should get the skull fossil
Dan chapter 2 . 4/25/2015
I like that dratini is a female not too many males and not too many females
also I love the levels
Dan chapter 1 . 4/25/2015
Awesome
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