Oh PLEASE update! I love this story! You have got the characters exactly the way they are supposed to be! Oh please update I really enjoyed this story.

k, wait, im a bit confused
who are all these T-named ppl?
tora is master? tasuki apprentice? trunks...oh, i uno, i give up lol

I thought that this was a very realistic story. Somewhat Jude Watson, or George Lucas material, but I've only read chapter one. Looking forward to things to come!

OH PPLLEEAASSEE WRITE MORE OF THIS STORY! I t seems like you have abandoned it. Please don't leave me hanging like this! I come on this website every day to see if you have written more!Please don't keep the unwritten chapters to yourself!

I LOVE YOUR FANFICTION! PLEASE FINISH THIS SERIES!

:)

You aho finish the story!

ending?

no! u MUST con't! if ur co-workers give up on ya, write it urself! i'll even help u (though i'm not exactly a wonderful, professional writer, but I like to think i'm not too bad...but i still haven't uploaded nething on -.-()) rather than have it completely stopped...but I'm sure u'd be able to do it w/o ur co-writers, ne? Welp, please PLEASE con't, thankies!

ok right more please

It was going good, untill you started babbeling about Dragon ball Z.

Hey!

I loved your story. Come on, keep writing! I want the next chapters, even if no one else does. Come on, for me?

Singing off

Starwars-FREAK