| Reviews for Better Late than Never |
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more-like-reyna chapter 1 . 7/19 ok wait no. SISTER? |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2019 Well,Reyna is the more serious |
Asteria daughter of Koios chapter 1 . 9/23/2015 Poseidon is salty not sweet |
The Lone Hunter chapter 1 . 8/15/2015 *tear* lol i love jeyna |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2014 Really good |
Natalie chapter 1 . 2/6/2013 ! |
Iris' Daughter chapter 1 . 2/1/2013 Why did you kill Jasper? Please don't hate me for asking this, but why? |
SwiftingInCampJupiter chapter 1 . 2/2/2013 Oh, my Gods. Can I just tell you that now my feels are splatterd on the wall and im lying n the cold hard ground. Jayna has always messed me up, but your story was just. Woah. |
I am Bianca Daughter of Hades chapter 1 . 1/28/2013 I love how you dated everything, really. It gives a very realistic feel. The Jeyna was beautiful and I like how you portray them. :) You have my appreciation! JEYNA FTW! |
Shaper of Winds chapter 1 . 1/24/2013 Wow this is AWSOME, I'm actually trying to decide if I should read all of your stories, cause you have a crap ton of them(all of which are probably amazing). You know what? I think I will. Wish me luck! And great job btw! |
Wonderstruck Pen chapter 1 . 1/24/2013 This fic deserves a standing ovation. Keep writing! -Pen |
WiseGirl7131 chapter 1 . 1/22/2013 I like how the first two parts are really fluffy and sweet and how the second two parts are kind of on the more sorrowful side. It kind of balances out so you have like this perfect combination of angst and fluff. |
Miss N Amber chapter 1 . 1/21/2013 god, that made me cry and I never cry... well it was very well written and your grammar was impeccable, well done. |
IamAnnabethdaughterofAthena chapter 1 . 1/21/2013 That was so sweet, It was great. |
Aariya chapter 1 . 1/21/2013 Author, you have created a masterpiece. One of your best pieces of work, you say? I agree. And looking through it, I see no grammar/spelling mistakes. I love your sentence structures—it’s easy to read, and the flow is magnificent, really. It’s hard to come across something like that in this fandom. You use proper dialogue, too. The best and worse thing, in my opinion, is the characterization. You’ve nailed Reyna—she is so in character. I love how she puts her profession before her feelings. Accepting his relationship with Piper? Ugh, I want to slap that daughter of Aphrodite. However, for Jason, I found him a bit too . . . positive, or humorous (I’ve read somewhere that he’s always serious)—but that’s okay because the last scene got me, and that his character in the series isn’t really that clear. “Even the strongest fall.” You definitely deserve longer reviews than this one. Keep up the good work! This . . . this is just flawless. |