I would read any book you ride... This was just perfect... It reallly make me happy and he doesn't look OOC because he definitively IS a tsundere...
Thank you!

*confused* I could had sworn this had 15 chapters... what happened to the rest...? am I losing my mind...?

Is there a sequel to this?! I want more! Also loved it!

Sequel please! Love it!

OMG. How can a single chapter be so awesome!? I've read all of your fanfics by the way and how can you be so awesome in making fighting scenes?! Dem goosebumps on my goosebumps! Onwards to chapter 2!

As expected from you! The fic is full of suspense and romance and OH MY GOD IT IS GREAT! I dunno what else to say. Oh, I know, please update this fast! Love you! Thank you very much!

hahahah i'v been reading all your god eater fanfics and god you really know how to bring out an emotion to the story .. practically making me tear up .. anyways XD this is a great find i love the story between this two

SHIOOOO! *sparkly eyes* Shio saves the day! x3

Ah... Jun... I wonder if that's Rin's God arc... xD

I hope Rin doesn't turn into a full aragami... she's like Lindow now though, so... xD

one more chapter? xD More story to read- x3

Anyways, update soon! x3

And finally the second chapter!
I'm really impressed with the size of it, really. Rin is going to be okay, what a relief. Tension never stopped to eat me. I'm also glad that here we can see Shio's side helping (well, not side...)
It was really worth waiting :)

What.. what... WHAT?! T-they tried to kill her?! B-but why?!

Urgh... geez, the frustrating things sometimes... but anyway, I'm glad Soma managed to save her... but... the three members... did they all die? Even the blond-haired girl...? Ugh, why death...

I don't mind that there isn't that much romance here, cause either way, this is pretty good owo I'll be waiting for the next chapter... and the reason why they tried to kill Rin

Ironic... "Rin" translates to "Ice" or "Cold" in Japanese... and she was stabbed by a blade with ice elements...

Anyway, Update soon!

I'm waiting, and nice touch with the guilty crown song. Well, at least I think it was from Guilty Crown...

Keep writing.

Oh so you decided to continue, after all...! Great! :D

As usual, I'm really fond of the way you describe things and narrate the story. The depths of what is being perceived by each character through their senses are clearly elaborated in a deliberate pace, allowing readers (at least me, in this case) to savour in what the characters might be thinking and feeling.

This is a suggestion, but maybe you would like to break paragraphs that are too long into tinier ones. Sometimes, it's just a bit confusing to see words piling up without some space between them... ;(

(And I am guessing that it is the Marduk that was introduced in this chapter, right?)
Anyways, I shall be waiting for the next chapter! Keep it up! ;D

Hello there! I've read all of your SomaxMshe fics. So yeah, I've become one of your loyal readers.

ANYWHO.

After trying to understand God Eater, playing and completing the main storyline of Godz Eater Burst and now waiting for the english translation of God Eater 2, you could say that I've come to adore the God Eater universe. To be honest, GE has become awfully close to my heart. So whenever I read fanfiction for it, I'm always looking for things that are both fun to read while staying true to the characters. I found what I was looking for in this story of yours. I'm quite surprised and pleased that I'm getting strangely addicted to the love story of Rin and Soma.

I really enjoyed how you managed to stay so in-character with all the leads, like Alisa and Kota *laughs* while still giving them a depth unseen in the actual game.

There are so many details you've added that have exceeded my expectations. (Like Rin's reassignment) You've created a humor and air around the story that is so bittersweet and funny at the same time. The many twists and turns are really interesting. (And yes, you are a tear jerker, you)

The relationship between Rin and Soma is growing at such a rate that it's wonderful to follow- as if you're the one actually watching it yourself. But, aside from very few mistakes, I'm quite attached to this story. I can't wait to read more.

Whew! That was a long review! If I seem annoying, I apologize. I just really love your SomaxMshe fics! It's like a drug.

What's beyond let, I wonder?

- Eclair Dolce

P.S
- Update soon, yeah?