With Ziva gracing our screens again and it being super obvious that she and tony are soulmates, I had to come back to your fic. I just love how your write their dynamic so much

Good part one but it mostly summary... with tony and Ziva marriage in it...

Lol how does Gibb not know :3 I thought Abby say Gibb is magic :D Lol

This is good

I love this :)

I like it at the moment, really good, will any changes actually occur tho? Or is it just a retelling with this meshed in to the side?

I just read all 20 chapters in one setting! I love it :D
On to part 2 next

Tony reciting some of the things he loves about Ziva is so sweet. I love seeing Ziva vulnerable and open too ("There is not as much temptation... to touch"). I can already see them settling into a comfortable routine as a married couple. Very enjoyable to see this dynamic explored.

This is excellent. I think that of all the "secret romance/marriage" fics out there, I enjoy yours the most. I love the tenderness between Tony and Ziva, the way you weave in and out of the show's scenes, and the portrayal of the characters is extremely on point. I definitely picture these two as much softer and loving while alone in addition to their set qualities and hard exteriors. I particularly enjoyed the presenting of the lock. Great work!

ok i was gonna wait until i finished the story (season) but i need to go to bed and didn't want to forget tomorrow. i just had a few comments and questions.

I know you already finished most of the series and i plan to read it all, but i have been reading some of the replies you left for other reviews and some i had already had thought of myself so...

I know someone mentioned/asked if you were going to have them start a family. I assume when you go off cannon (if i am using the term correctly - when you are not trying to follow the show in story) you may touch on it but i did think it was a good idea. - i even thought of ways they could keep it secret. they could get pregnant towards the end of a season and then she could have the baby in the summer so that it didn't conflict with the show. (although i guess realistically they would work through the summer with the team unless it was when they were all separated - that could even be drama for tiva)

ok before i just go off on a tangent since it wont make a difference and has so many issues since i would think one or both of them to be with the baby - not in daycare/babysitter

my question is why exactly are they keeping it a secret for so long. not that i would not love seeing them sneak around at work to steal moments together. i guess i always figured if they did the others would be happy for them (eventually) and they would have had them at the wedding

well i am babbling so i apologize for that. but i do love your story idea, even if it takes me forever to finish reading because both your tiva series are really long (i finished part 2 of remenents but wanted some tiva togetherness so switched to this for now-in all fairness this series was want brought me to your page to find the other one)

anyway great writing i look forward to reading the rest of both series sometime in the future.

This whole deal of Gibbs coming back and treating Tony is one of the reasons i did stop watching the show... At least in your story the reason for Tony to stay if half good...

it had a really good concept and ended pretty well

Hi! I'm currently reading your fic... And I like it!
You've just made a little mistake in this chapter...
René Benoit tells "Bonjour ma fille" to his daughter. You've written "Bonjour mon fille". He would have said "mon" if he was talking to his son. But Jeanne is a girl, so it's "ma". "Bonjour ma fille"
Ah, and it's René, not Rene.
I'm french... I hope you won't be angry I correct your french. I just wanna help you to improve your fic :)

I just read the whole thing at once and I gotta say, this has to be my favorite Tiva fanfic ever. I loved every part of it

Wow I just found your story and read the entire part 1 in 2 sittings. Absolutely incredible. It's so interesting to think about the season now see the season through the eyes of Tony and Ziva as a married couple. With Cote's departure I would love to think of your events as fact! Incredible I can't wait to read the rest of the story you have crafted especially since you storyline flows so very will with the actual facts/dialogue of the episode. AMAZING job