Love the story so far, can't wait! Keep it up!

Well it does seem different. I admit I haven't read all that many, yet, though. Still seems interesting.
I've learned that you can write the word doc, save it, and the words you bolded/italicized stay that way when you upload it. To fix your broken coding.
And, not to be mean, but you might want to look for a beta. There's certain words that throw the reader off a bit when wrong.

Don't get discouraged, though! I'd like to read more. :]

Thank goodness she is safe?!

Aww! That was adorable! Please update soon!

Is this story goin to have some horror to it? xD jus asking. nevermind the romance
This was an "awesome" chapter! i never used to word "awesome" before. She finally remembers! and She wished herself away to the Goblin king... she may regret it later... -_- and yhu kinda got meh confuse for a moment... who is the queen? Goblin Queen? o.o yhu keeping meh on the suspense side. please update within 5 days!

Now i/we now know why Jareth needs Sarah to remember. The Labyrinth is weakening. Due to being remembered? or other circumstances?
Hehehe...I don't know why i always smile when it comes to the Old Wiseman.
Will the next chapter come to be what happens after chapter 1?
and leaving us/me reviewers on some sort of suspense that is rather killing us. Not nice of you. (grin)
Update soon and we will all be waiting for you to update.

This caught my eye and wow. Horror to be following a bird into the woods. Love the way you had put the setting and had some sort of dark theme to it.
Please next chapter. Cant wait.